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for Strong Enough

by grrarrg0908

person Daxi
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, did not see that one coming! Hermione and malfoy huh? well now we know why she\'s got that nasty scar... keeeeeep posting =) *wishing: happy ending* hugs.
person Marine
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK I don\'t scream!!!
But now I\'m jealous! Hermione has sex with Sevi, ok that\'s fine but now with MY LUCIUS! And he was in love! What did you do that to me? That\'s cruel!
But I want to read the next chapter.
I have seen you love tatoos. I think you should read The Mirror Of Maybe it\'s a Harry Potter fanfic and there is a chapter where Harry has got new tatoos, you could like it! He\'s very sexy!!!!!
BYE!!!
person Marine
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OUPS little mistake! Why did you do that to me? It\'s better, isn\'t it!
PLEASE UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTER or I won\'t scream but I\'ll paint in pink my black cat Voldie!
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!! This just gives me more reason to hate Lucius!!! Sev better get his head out of his (_!_) because he loves her, he can\'t just keep trying to hide from it!!! They are so right for each other!!! Make them okay, PLEEEAAAASSSSE!!! If killing off Lucius happens to help that along, I\'m all for that as well!!!
Deb >^..^< Who believes that it is not a bad thing to beg ;-)
person kate
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wait, wait, wait....

severus believes lucius\' mystery girl was hermione? did he not pay attention to lucius\' description?? typical male.... unless you\'re being really really cruel and plan to reveal our girl was incognito. and you wouldn\'t do that. would you? GAH!

as hermione has said more than once, \"bring it on\" == can\'t wait to read more!!!!
person Red Writing Hood
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Man...I hope it wasnt Hermione that Lucius was with. That would suck. Poor Severus seems a tad bit...jealous? Love the story so far.

RWH
person Fish
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m in Eastwood, near Southe
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YAY! NIRVANA!

\"Well we don\'t sound
Like Madonna
Buy our album,
WE\'RE NIRVANA!
Sing distinctly
We don\'t wanna!
Buy our album,
WE\'RE NIRVANA!\"
\'t \'t take that e-mail personally - i likesee see what you\'ve written... it lets the reviewers know that you do actually receive their reviews and read them! Some writers don\'t.

Right... on with the review!

YAY WITH THE MUSIC AGAIN! (i found my coldplay album! yay!)
I loved it when Severus woke up! Tloodlood of questions! lol...
And all the sarcastic comments and snarky stuff... it\'s excellent!

YOU\'RE A DIAMOND!

*voices agree*
*makes music for author using and old tin bathtub and a large potato*

YAY!

Ciao,
Fish - wanting more!... wai the there IS MORE! wow...
person Fish
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Twisted... i do love it though... and i\'m hanging on for more!
I saw this dude in the street today and, though he had dark brown (not black) hair, he looked the SPITTING BLOODY IMAGE of Sev! If only his girlfriend weren\'t there, lol - i\'d have gone and... well...

NOT in the street though... I\'d attempt a full body bind using a chopstick (lack of wand), THEN drag him elsewhere... do you think severus would fall for such a trick? Maybe if the chopstick was painted and didn\'t have the name fo the restaurant pasted all over it... yeah... i think i might try that...

lol... forget the phoenix feather - try seagul feathers!

more soon, loving this... love it all! MORE MORE MORE!
*saucepans return, drunk*
oh no... *throws large potatoes at saucepans*
*potatoes refuse to be thrown*
*makes more music with tin baths, saucepans, chopsticks and large potatoes*

ciao,
Fish
person shemhamforash
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn this Hermione is made of...something impenetrable. Who the hell could stand being invaded by that deranged pretty boy Lucius? For more then 5 minutes. Not me...never ever. Poor Sev, I am quite sure he has himself convinced that he will have nothing to do with Hemione anymore. Have to wonder however if *ahem* Sev jr *wink* will feel the same way...

As for me holding Sev hostage here because I threatenedmakemake a sacrificial offering out of him..bah. Completely untrue. Fact is I threatened to make one out of you. For some reason he is all fluffy and soppy when I mention you...what can I say? I told you what we had was purely physical. I hate the clingy ones. Works out well...

Am glad you chose to visit RC in Romper Stomper. Excellent flick. Loved Hando. The Tattoo\'s *melts*. *drools*.*composes self*

Anxiously awaiting more shagging...really really anxious... hem hem xxx
person nevillus
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I need more. I read all of this, this mornig. Can\'t wait to see how Hermione explains herself to Sev about Lucius. Should be interesting. LOVE the sexgod Sev in the rain. You are doing great. Keep writing and i will keep reading.
nev (27 single but not for long ..yay... Nevada, USA with a 11 1/2 yr. old son. With SS/HG it is the age difference that has me hooked. 2s bes between myself and soon to be other half.