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for Strong Enough

by grrarrg0908

person Fish
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, there\'s one line that I could just imagine SO much... and it went like this, \"Oh Severus, can be such a charmer at times.\"
AHAHAHA! -- yes, i have been drinking one too many Fosters, but... meh...

Anyways... got your first tatoo over here, eh? What is it? I\'m after a wolf - on my shoulder... or perhaps i can get \'Snape\' tatooed across my back... OR just a nice little \'severus\' around my belly-button! haha... people would wonder... *hides computer screen*

yes, i have to hide the computer screen - am at library, comr har has gone to the doctors... well, vets really... i think it has rabies... so yeah, gotta go pick it up later... but, as it is obvious, i couldn\'t stay off the machines too long! lol, have been here about an hour now... and am overjoyed at being able to read another chapter or two of \'Strong Enough\' YAY! WHOOPDEEDOO!

okay... still hyper and a *little* tipsy... at least i\'m not burning the books...

ironically enough, OotP, PoA and CoS are staring at me from the shelf oveere.ere... hmmmm... i wonder if they\'d notice me slipping in a few more hours here... just reading...

Great chapters, as always! -- and yes, i\'m enjoying it!... *mutters* is that not obvious!

i found out some shocking news today... i could have gone to the LA special previews... there was a voucher in the newspaper... i just so happened to find that page... *breaks down* IT\'S NOT FAAAAAAIR!!!

If i ask Santa for Alan Rickman for christmas... do you think I\'ll get him?

Oh well, yes, it\'s a long review! lol

Ciao,
Fish

PS: the potatoes thank-you for your support... do they sound okay now?
PPS: I\'M SEEING MUSE AT WEMBLEY ON NOVEMBER 26TH!!! -- yes, i\'m bragging!
PPPS: hah, had you going! -- F
person cookie35
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was NASTY!!! sanpe is such an asshole... but the story is getting good...... REAL good! can;t wait for the next update.. um, hermione\'s last line... did she really mean she\'d rather sleep with lucius again? what happened to lucius anyway? good going@!
person PotionsMistressM
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!? She CAN\'T just leave him! She CAN\'T give up! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Maybe she should beat some sense into him! And just why DID she fuck Lucius Malfoy for 6 months, may I ask? You are an evil author! Now, I\'m sitting here practically squirming in my seat for the next update while at the same time being horrified by what my poor Severus is doing to even poorer Hermione! ... Couple of deep breaths... Can you tell I majored in Drama?
Great chapter nonetheless, though I hope this situation is righted quickly! As for your writer\'s block, I REALLY hope it clears up, but if it doesn\'t you should just have them fuck like rabbits. I\'m sure that would appease a great number of your followers!
And, no, I cannot be patient when it comes to sweet, lemony goodness! I would like some more. Now, please. \'Casue I know pressure help alleviate writer\'s block so often...=)
*M*
PS- I have been having the same trouble getting on the sight as you- been trying to review for 2 days now!
person Nat
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Loovvee it .It\'s really great keep on writing.U really have talent.
person Estrilda
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes - a jealous Severus is an amazing Severus - please more?
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU for updating!!! Now, here comes the begging..... PLEEEEEEEEEASE, PRETTY PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE let them make up in the \"good way\", sweat, tears, totaly pleasurable way!!! They are just so good at being bad, but they really are better at being together, just wish they would figure it the hell out!!! They need to stop thinking all of the negative & concentrate on how good they make each other feel!!! I hope that somewhere along the line they can find a happy medium, stop with the tongue lashings of each other & put their tongues to better, more satisfying use!!! Can\'t wait for more!!! Deb >^..^<
person Rilla
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, don\'t make me cry! What an emotional cliffhanger. Writer\'s block, begone, I say! I want to read more.
person kate
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i\'m so relieved (hot and nasty sex) that you (smut) understand me (naked severus) so well (mind-blowing sex). you know (smut) how much i love (heavy breathing) your work....

love the building tension. can\'t wait to see how it resolves!
person Isabella
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better keep writing and I\'ll keep reading
person Pixi
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this story. Please keep it up. Yummy tattoos. I love tattoos, one day I hope to have a few of my own. I keep holding off until I can find someone who\'s work I really love. I have promised myself my first one when I hit my goal weight, I have 40 more pounds to lose and then I get a \"Shadowpixi\" on my upper right shoulder.

I love how you have Hermione so strong. But maybe its just me, she seems so fragile inside. Like Snape. Strong on the outside, but needy and hurt inside. Also, its good to see an adult Hermione paired with Snape. I think the two make a great couple, but I think that Snape needs someone with a little bit more backbone than a lot of people write her with. After all, she has to be able to stand up to him right?

Keep up the great work...

Pixi