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for Strong Enough

by grrarrg0908

person deblovesdragon
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter (21). Now they are getting somewhere. Letting down their guards and betruetrue to themselves and each other. Beautiful. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Red Writing Hood
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you know something? I love a good story where I have to keep running to the bathroom for more tissue to wipe my snotty nose on because I cant keep the tears from coming...This was pure...ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

In other words...I loved it

Red
person nesscafe
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEEK! No don\'t withhold chapters!!! I have all the way to chapter 3 done on Confessions and chapter 4 is the smut, but eta eta is still working on them. I had to get a beta. I just don\'t trust my own writing w/out someone to proof for me.

I have to say this was a nice chapter. Sweet, but not all mushy. I am glad that you didn\'t get all mushy since it would have ruined the rough and tumble attitudes of Snape and Mione! I really love this story! As always I look forward to the next round. Oh and I should call you Neville since it\'s your writing that\'s so explosive! ;c)

Hugs,
Ness
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love the sexual tension as well as the anger and jealousy that Snape has toward Hermione as well as Lucius. Please update again and soon!
person Estrilda
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes - just keeps getting better. Her breath starts coming faster in anticipation as she scrolls down and then she sees the author\'s notes. A soft curse escapes her lips and she saves the new chapter to favorites and waits. No, she won\'t just wait, she\'\'ll leave a review and beg - - - More? Please?
person PotionsMistressM
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you are evil! I cannot believe he called a w a whore. I am literally shaking at the injustice... but the lemon was a nice light dessert. Quite refreshing, actually. But I\'m still mad at him! Bad Severus! I shall have to discipline... ...
person jkrazed
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great angry sex is so yummy!! Great chapter, can\'t wait for the next!
person nesscafe
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man! Your writing so good I\'m actually scared these two are going to kill each other! Will there be any happiness for them? Maybe they really shouldn\'t be in the same area w/ each other! They are so volitile I\'m afraid my computer is going to explode! That having been said... Umm... More please!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
For being without your muse, you are doing one hell of a GREAT job!!! Chapter 20 has only left me wanting more!!! I can only imagine how intriguing this will get if Zephyr gives you a nudge... though I do feel that you are doing quite well now!!! Me personally, I think she should tie him to a chair (better yet a bed) & then he will have no choice but to hear her out & to tell her how he really feels about her!!! Then again, that could go either way, maybe he could do it until she tells him what he really needs to hear, that she does in fact love him!! am am so looking forward to your next update!!! Deb >^..^<
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwe Hon you are too too sweet! I loved this chapter when I first read it and I love it even more now, Keep it sweets.!!!!!!!!

Zephyr