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for Strong Enough

by grrarrg0908

person Kait
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww...just goes to show that even behind the most embittered heart can lurk a small morsel of toffee. Thank you Grr girl, I really loved that touch. Also, thought the Montague/Capulet Gryffindor/Slytherin connection very astute and worked like a charm. Nice to see Ginny again, too. Bless your muse ~~~K~~~
person Estrilda
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - I just went away a few weeks and get a few chapters all at one time. Hope you have some nice \"down time\" over the holidays to write lots about our jealous possessive Snape and his combative sexy Hermione. I can\'t wait for more - at least not very long. I can\'t believe our Severus isn\'t getting to put at least some of those hormonal teenage boys in their place with Hermione teaching classesher her FM boots.
person shiv5468
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do like to see a nice strong Hermione determined to prod buttock. Will Lucius be coming back into things at some point, and will he recognise his old squeeze?
person cookie35
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, i personally would like a LM/HG prequel/sequel. Anyway! that was worth the w Tha That last bit was great. not to sad and not too mushy! chapter 23 was absolutely HOT! hey, cool tattoes on hermione\'s back. I would like to have that tattoo on heck! ck! that was quite an inspiration. was that mirror image. do you personally have tattoes? i don\'t my parents would kill me. With all the work laid out for snape and hermion, I hope they won\'t drift apart. C\'est magnifique!
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love the sexual bantering between Severus and Hermione as they are heading to teach the students. I hope you update again soon.

Tiff
person nesscafe
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh don\'t worry, I will tell you if it gets dull, but I don\'t see that happening! You\'re too good! I really liked this last chapter for some reason. Could be the innuendo at the begining or maybe it was the Gryff n\' Sly DA class that I liked. I\'m not sure, but I enjoyed it very much! Write on!!!

I\'m sorry for the wait on Confessions. I think my beta has deserted me. I need another one I guess. I just hate to ask... I actually have chapters 1 thru 3 done and 4 is half written. I\'m not very good at the smut part. You\'d think as much as I read I\'d be an expert, but writing it yourself is not so easy. My hats off to you and the other masters!

Hugs,
Ness
person PotionsMistressM
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, those boots again! Excellent exchange between the two of them. Makes me want to put on my own boots. Too bad I\'m alone, though... I REALLY REALLY liked this chapter- love the conversations between the two of them, the way they held the class, the gratitude Severus showed Hermione. I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY liked this one! More, please, and soon. Oh yeah- loved the Romeo and Juliet stuff, too. However, after ten hours at work today, I almost said \"Romy and Michelle\" instead. I need help...
WRITE MORE SOON!
*M*
PS-I can dish it out, but I can\'t take it, so don\'t demand more of mine quite yet... :(
person Aoibheann
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*APPLAUSE* Most excellent work!
person Flick
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it did take a little while to read all that but it was fun and I couldn\'t tear myself away. As for the bad ending, I don\'t know why I think that, just a feeling I get, I\'m wrong aren\'t I? hee hee *Prays she\'s wrong* Anyway great chapter. Like the inclusion of Romeo and Juliet in that chappie. More soon plzzzz :)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24 was BRILLIANT!!! I LOVE the way the room was set up for them after their DELICIOUS conversation;-) Will you be getting them back into that room soon?!?

I really like the way that you had Hermione & Severus show their unity & put those 2 snotty girls in their place!!! Having all of them read Romeo & Juliet is a fabulous move.... if that doesn\'t give them some insight, not much else will!!! I do hope that Fred Herbert and Sarah King will be able to work things out & that Hermione will see that he really wasn\'t the problem.

As always Albus never ceases to amaze me*