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person Aoibheann
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*APPLAUSE*
As usual, a wonderful, masterful chapter!
person nesscafe
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a chapter! Love the sparing myself! Like you it\'s like you said really hot foreplay! YUM!!! I don\'t know why I\'m surprised that Ginny opened her big mouth and blabbed to Harry & Ron! I would have slugged her in the face! God it was so none of her business and she acts like not only is it her business but she needs to protect Hermione like she\'s some 5 yr old taking candy from a stranger! And Ron & Harry... Well, I\'m not surprised at how they reacted at all. Especially since they got their information from that nosey twit Ginny! It was so sweet when Sev said all those things about Hermione to them. That really was something special! Awsome writing!

I hope you won\'t be expecting another update for a while from me. I\'m still trying to decide how I want things to go. I have 2 different ideas, but I\'m not sure which I\'m going to go with yet! Don\'t you hate that!

Hugs,
Ness
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26....... THANK YOU so much for your kind words!!! I am leaving early tomorrow morning, but will be checking to see what\'s new after I get back.

I LOVED this chapter!!! It was nice to see Sev & Hermione stand united!!! I think she gave Harry, Ron & Ginny a good bit of advice!!! Can\'t wait to see how the 3 of them deal with her relationship*
person Estrilda
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So glad that Ginny is going to be on Hermione\'s side now - hope they work it soonsoon. I loved her \"if you\'ve got a problem with that\" answer. Hope you can squeeze in more story for your not so patiently waiting readers soon. This was kind of short - pout, pout.
person brittni
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is so good! ive just read from the first chapter to the last and there is only one thing i have to say: get yer ass over here and do some more work! pretty please? with sugar on top and a cherry too? i luv this story, its on my favorites so i can check back whenever i want so i wont have to deal with looking for it, so i check back a lot, and i want to see another chapter when i come back! do you understand me? *gets down on hands and knees* ive even resorted to begging! it is such a good story! YOU HAVE TO WORK ON IT! oh, and i loved the jealousy added to the last chapter, really very good. it was such a nice touch! but, really, you have to work on it some more! i command you!
person cookie35
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* that was amazing. that was 100 points for sevv\'s jealousy... ooooooooohhhhh, ginny\'s here. what is she up to. haha. i just had this idea, wouldn\'t it be great if ginny and hermione have a relationship even though she\'s with snape? hahaha.. no, im just kidding. sev\'s hot. I think it\'s really refreshing for couples to show their love through bone breaking, smashing etc. Great job. it was worth the wait!
person XxphoenixX
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW. That\'s so cute. This is one couple I would not think of as cute but for some reason they are. AWWWW. I really love this story... been reading since the start but too lazy to review (sorry!). I\'m really glad you brought some other people in, I always get annoyed when all of Hermione\'s friends that would potentially object to her relationship with Snape conveniently disappear. Now I\'m curious as to what will happen with Ginny. Will they become friends? Will Hermione be too wrapped up in Severus? Will he continue to be overprotective? Will Ginny tell Ron and Harry? Will a giant emu sweep down and kill them all? Are hynenas really an unholy cross between cats and dogs? Will I be able to make this review so long that I never get back to my French essay? All this and more next time on Strong Enough.
Gee, I got off track there, didn\'t I?
person Red Writing Hood
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, I wouldnt want to share him either. With no one, no school, no teachers, no students. Just truffle him up and keep him locked up in the...uh...ok...overstep the the boundarys here. I\'m glad to see Ginny back. ts going to be hard for Hermione to get back into being a friend again. But just like old habits...some things cant be forgotten. And yeah, as for that smart mouthed bitch. I have some nice little things for her to do for the rest of her stay. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Red
person PotionsMistressM
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re right, he is a prick! But such a sexy one!... Oh, Severus Snape! So hot! Want to touch! Of course I\'ll keep writing asg asg as YOU keep writing. Well, honestly, I\'d write without you.
But it wouldn\'t be as much fun!
Keep up the super-awesome work!
Again, you are the highlight of the night.
Oh, about your proposal... Could you move to Utah so that Snape could legally be husband to both of us? Silly polygamists...
person nesscafe
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo new chapter! Just wanted to let you know like the others it rocked! Go you! I loved the sparring! That was so cool how she got all concerned when he got hurt! It\'s really cool the way you\'ve been able to keep them in character and start a romance! I can definately see Snape as jealous of sharing Hermione\'s time w/ anyone and I can see Hermione being so perseptive when it comes to his feelings. Very cool there! I\'m a little curious about the arrival of the young Miss Weasley. I look forward to the next chapter.