rate_review Reviews

Wow. I really am impressed with your vivid descriptions and how you expressed those character\'s personalities so vividly. To tell you the truth, I was more interested in their reactions than the explicit sex. It really is amazing. I\'m trying to write myself, but I haven\'t written anything good. It is very hard for me to use characters and help enforce their characterization. Just so hard. I\'m guessing if I read more great works like yours, then I might be able to enhance my writing skills someday to be able to actually complete a whole fan story or story.

I found this fic last year and lost it again as promptly, forgetting to bookmark. I have to say, of all the fanfic I've read, this is my absolute favorite. There's something in the way you write that really works for the characters you use. You rock!

-DaDee

Mmm Mmm Mmm Mmm MMM! Now that was some nau fan fanfic! Wonderfully written - it was obvious how Severus is so enamored of Lucius yet does not want to show it - and that Lucius is a naughty little pleasure-whore! VERY VERY well done. This is good by itself, but there should be more! C\'mon! Please?

- \'Da Kitten

oh, very nice... bed linen burn? The poor darlings. I am astounded that they weren\'t mauled more severely. Well-written, with quite good characterisation (particularly Severus). Just one thing - what were the potential long-term consequences?

*grins* coooooooooooooooooooooooooool! ^_^ You did a great job with the whole first time thing. Though...it usually hurts a bit...or a lot...>.> yeah *uber blush* But with magical plants, it probably numbed the pain away. Anyways! Great and yummy fic ^_^

Oh, that was good...so good. Will we see more of this story?