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OMG! This is hilarious so far! I knew that one of the Malfoys was going to be the Prince, but the problem with it being Draco is that I just can\'t see Lucius being the doddy old foolish king. On the other hand, I can see it being Albus, but well, there goes the natural father/son pairing, lol. I also knew that Hagrid would be the giant (I mean, c\'mon, that one was obvious), and I figured Harry would be \"Indigo\", lol, but I was flabberghasted to see Crabbe as what\'shisname. I mean, in a way it works, but you give Crabbe WAY TOO MUCH BRAINS! lol. I can\'t wait to see who the 6 fingered man is (Lucius, maybe?) and who plays the Healer, lol (maybe that will be Ron, lol). Anyway, don\'t worry about working off the movie, I liked the movie better than the book anyway. Of course, it\'s not helping that I\'m hearing everyone speak in the voices used in the movie! lol.

I only have two things to say that are bad...1 she should be saying FARM BOY...2 he should be saying AS YOU WISH...other than that I love love love it

THIS IS THE WORST FIC I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!

lol
adorable !!!! :)

(big Princess Bride fan here!)

:-D

when you said \"the scoliosis,\" I think you meant \"this colossus,\" because that was what they said in the movie. Are you just going to write the entire story word by word like the mo
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WOW it\'s 3AM...Story is good, except for two things
Sorry hate to say it but the typoes keep messing me up and 2: I can\'t pictyure Snape as Westly...Snape as Hermie\'s lover...fantastic can\'t get enough...but Westly is Westly because (RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROWR) ...yeah...can\'t picture anybody but westly as westly...act against all tis gis good to do therwise...(example:\"What did the Ice Cream ever do to you?\") Keep writing though..absolutely adore the Spaniard, Harry or otherwise.(ONCE AGAIN RRRRRRRRRRRROWRRRRRRRRR!(HEE HEE MORE R\'s)) bye, Yas

well your fics not totally bad considering that you stole all the lines from the movie and just did some character name switching. might i suggest though that if you do go ahead with this uh..sequal that you use some creativity in it. but like i said not to bad. i am willing to give some space just cause this is your first fic. in time you\'ll get better. just get a beta before you post your new fic. beta\'s work wonders. =)

yo u copied the whole damn book! it really did suck...;snickers;

speechless.......

dear girl, while I loathe to be rude, that was utter shite. No, really,, I mean it. That wasn\'t fanfiction. That was a straight lift. Go back to stacking sleves and drooling