rate_review Reviews

Wow. Absolutely fantastic. I don\'t normally have the patience to read a story as long as this all in one go, but this just held me riveted. Well done.

Very good story! At first, I had a little trouble believing Hermione would go along with it; once I let go of that reservation, I really enjoyed the fic. Malfoy was a perfect little sh*t, very canon - but then when it came to \'brass tacks\', he wasn\'t so brave after all. He was perfectly in character! :)

Overall, the fic had vivid descriptions, good characterizations, and just the right amount of action. The sex scenes were well done, and Malfoy was appropriately brutal in them, even in her nightmares. Nicely done! :)

0o0o, that was a fantastic fic! I\'m so glad Hermione didn\'t fall for Draco in the end, like so many of these fics. I thought your characterisation of Ron was great, and I loved your Snape too! What a rotton bastard Draco is though! 0o0o, harsh, but then, he is a Malfoy! You have an great story here, and I thought you kept it intersesting with the chapters being the right length every time. I liked the way you kept the rapes real by showing Hermione\'s protest and lack of want, and also how afraid she was afterward. It was a really great fic! Keep up with the writting! I can go write some now that I\'ve finally finished reading yours (thats what I kept doing when I came on the computor instead of writing my own! Lol).

Lov
x~Beki~x
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Ugh, I wish I can write more to you about your story, but unfortunately, I\'m in the middle of studying for my finals. I loved your story though. I wasn\'t sure when I first started because I had no idea what the pairing would end up as. I was so afraid that you end up with Hermione actually *falling* for such a sickening thing. But you didn\'t, and you were incredibly smart in the portrayals and I really appreciate what you were trying to do. I look forward to your future endeavors. Have a great night.

That was a great ending.
You did a great job writing this story..


Sincerely,
Air-Force_Brat

Wow... this is a really well written story...
I had to comment on Chapter 9, because the end of the chapter almost made me cry...
:: Runs off to finish reading the story ::

Madame
I have to say that this one had it all. Good plot, Good smut, and great character development. I have never read a HP book, but i have seen both movies and Snape strikes me as a good man trying to be thought of as an asshole. He\'s trying to convince himself instead of everyone else. He did mutter that counter curse at the match in HP1.
I loved your story. Keep them coming.

lynn Anderson
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it was good I just wanted Ron and hermione to get back together! very well written...and left me on the edge of my seat...

This was a great story.

I am glad that everything was put right in the end.

*goes off to slaughter Malfoy*

Wow. This story is just...wow. So tight and consistent...and truly briliantly writen. Few, if any, stories can tuch me like yours did. Draco was an ass...and completley in character, especially after reading The Order of the Phoenix. The Ron/Hermione shipping was loveley, I\'m glad some people stand by them. And of course all your other characters were very reallistic as well...somehow I think you borrowed J.K.\'s mind for a while! All in all, this is amazing and VERY few authors could pull it off so niceley. Congratulations to you; this is one fic I\'m not going to forget.

Love,

E.D. Weasley