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by Jennlee

schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's one of my favorites. I love the fact that it ends with Ron/Hermione.

Well done.
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person e8792m
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was really into the story, but, in my opinion, the ending killed it. Oh, you got raped by blackmail, and you didn't tell us, not wanting your parents or friends' loved ones to die... How selfish of you!
Seriously. Ron and Harry would NOT act like that. They'd go and kill Malfoy.

And I think Hermione wouldn't be quite so dull, Malfoy's plan was easy to see through. Oh, and I don't think Malfoy is really that evil, but that's far from the worst thing in the story. Still, this was one of the first stories I really felt with. It gave me stomach aches.
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person vgss
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't like Draco/Hermione, or many-part stories. But I liked this. Well done :)
person Enchanted Faery
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this fic was sooo dark! I've never seen Draco portrayed this way in any dm/hg fics! it was disturbing, but I couldn't stop reading it! I felt so horrible for hermione! u did an awesome job at this, but there is on thing I needed to point out...u have LOTS of typos on here and sometimes it took away from the fic. U might want to go over the chapters again. But besides that good fic!
person sapphire
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was fantastic....Very suspensful :)
person Danny
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very good i hope everything turns alright with Hermoine and Ron. When she kissed Snape that was funny. Hope you continue o write.
person Kitiara Starfire
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. Was glad to see Hermione stand up and get a little revenge. Keep up the writing.
person lysa1
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A seriously disturbed Draco on the loose was rather scary in this story. Hermione isn