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by cherylzv

person GlindaTrisstt
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice job as usual !!! Mmmmmmm, to shower with Severus ^_^

More more more please ......

Glinda
person EVegvary
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. You\'ve got a great way of writing lemons and the erotic tension you\'ve created is just heady! Yum!

Thank you for reviewin pie piece - it\'s appreciated more than you can know.

I\'ll keep awaiting yupdaupdates.

Be well and here\'s to the muse!
person leda
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am hooked now. Please dont wait to long to update. Love the story.
person CoffeeBuzz
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yessss!!! Thank youuuuuuu!!!
person Talene
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehe....i was waiting for this last chapter with bated breath! BRAVO!!!
person Magdelena
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Again, you have outdone yourself. These chapters are fantastic!! You are a great writer. Keep it up. And have fun in Algebra. :) (YUCK!)
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM


This has been an absolutely amazing story !! I don\'t see why it has not gotten more reviews, but it makes me feel better about my stories getting so few.

So...... great job.......keep it up........and woo hoo Sex God Severus !! (Unfortunatley, we know men are NOT like that, but we can dream........)

Glinda
person EVegvary
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t tell you how thrilled I was when I saw how many chapters I had to catch up on! I\'m really enjoying this story. I love your OC - she\'s really well developed and fits in perfectly with the HP world. Nicely done. Snape is becoming more human and that\'s always enjoyable!

My only concern with your last chapter is - did did Megan know where to find Snape and why did she follow him to such a place? I will go back and recheck, perhaps I missed it.

Keep writing - you\'re doing a great job!
person Talene
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is lov My My heart aches so for Severus! I know you will let everythiung work out well in the end but still my heart is pained in the anticipation! This is one of my favorite stories!!
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story. I have been following it since you first posted, but realized when I saw your review of my story that I had forgotten to review yours. Sorry!! Anyways...as I already said I loved it. You have developed a wonderful original character. And you\'ve done a fantastic job making your readers fiend for info about her past with your first chapter. BTW I love the insertion of Bill Weasley. He\'s been a favorite of mine since JKR first described him in Book 4. I\'ll be thrilled if she winds up with either BW or SS.

If you ever need a muse feel free to email me. I\'ve got bunches of plot ideas, and no time to write them. I\'d be happy to share. (If you get a chance, I\'ve got two more fanfics posted here, one starring BW! I\'d love to see what you think of them).

Good job, again.

Magdelena