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by cherylzv

person Talene
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!! I LOVE this story!! I have waited for soooo long for the update! It was worth it! Please continue to write!
person Jorrn
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading through this. Loved the idea of Meg with her changing hair...don\'t we all wish we could change like her, though perhaps not green. I like the fact that though she was adopted and raised by the Waters, they truly care for her. It is nice that though they are muggles, they are accepting of her abilities and her world. I love the contrast with her beauty and warmth with Severus\' coolness and er..lack of beauty. But I really love that she searches for the man he truly is rather than the one he presents to everyone else. I also like the unfolding mystery of what is going to happen next. Can\'t wait to see. Would love to see Snape as a papa!
person Barrie
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How did Severus get injured? Was he the entertainment? I must have missed something. Great story so far and I really like the oc, she\'s great.
person shemhamforash
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, So much for my previous exquiste contented tunnel vision on Sev having anything to do with anyone except Hermione. *Sighs* Thank you for bringing me out of a blind sided stupor. I am just glad that the first courageous attempt I made to read past SS/HG pairings was so brilliant---I could have beed scarred for life had it not been.

Please update soon, desperately craving more

Shemxxx
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh COOL!!! LOL HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!
person Magdelena
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Awesome!!! Awesome!!! You had me going until her dad slipped up. It never even occurred to me that Albus could be the uncle.

Great Chapter!!!

Maggie
person CoffeeBuzz
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! What a neat surprise!
person kath
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have just been reading this story thus far and although love it and plan to read to the end and hope you write more I would just like to point out a few things. This is by no means a criticism but when JKR made Harry Potter she made all her characters floored in one way or the other. Harry has Glasses and messy hair but has the courage to compensate, Hemione has big teeth and bushy hair but makes up for it with intelligence and wit, as with Snape who has long greasy hair and a hooked nose but his charisma overshadows these faults. Maybe its just me but when I read a character that is Beautiful, Intel lent, nice while being a sportsman and musician at the same time and generally perfect it overwhelms me and I can\'t think of that character in my mind as a real person because someone that perfect isn\'t believable as a character. I hope that some time during this story her emotional damage will surface and some cracks will show in her character.
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story!! Please don\'t run out of ideas..
person Magdelena
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are truly doing an amazing job with this story. I loved the way you handled Bill in this. Just because one guy gets the girl doesn\'t have to make the other fellow a bad guy. Fantastic as usual. Loved the update!! What idea has our brilliant Megan inspired???

Magdelena