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Oh yay...a love for Hermione. I hope Krum doesnt push her to far away in his anger. Ugh...youth is wasted on the young.

Red

Oh my god, the beginning was so well described - it also was so sad, the description of Meg holding onto her bunny was just so heart-breaking. I\'ll soon read the rest of this fan fic. Excellent from what I\'ve read so far.

luv lily

Okay R., how is Viktor going to save the day? What is the big plan? Write more soon... Izz can\'tz standz it!

This story is amazing! I tried it on a rec and am glad I did! Your style is so cool and your OFC is so much better than some I have seen. Plus I like seeing our dear Sev with a *grownup* for a changnd snd someone who is a match for him and not just in awe of him. Pls update soon - am looking forwrad to it.

HUGS

Hey! Look at the delays in mine! I would have NO room to talk! LOL Such a wonderful story! Who\'re you going to have herm go after or fall forthe ever popular Remus? Still reading....

Yet another fantastic update. I\'m so happy with your OC. She\'s such a great character. Strong enough to match wits and magical abilities with the likes of Severus Snape or several of her cocky students (hee hee), but delicate and genuine enough to need Molly\'s approval. I also love the scene between Ginny and Harry. I love that you\'ve developed their relationship slowly. Why does everyone think that kissing is point A and sex is point B. Obviously, you\'ve shown through the slow progression of their sexual relationship that you are one of the individuals who realizes that sex is point Z, and half of the fun is getting from B to C to D...etc... Bravo!! Keep up the fabulous updates. I was craving for more of your work and I am now happy! :)

(BTW Marauders chaps 1-6 is up. Lemme know what you think)

Maggie

I love your fic!!! I can\'t wait for the final battle! Is it going to be set outdoors so Megan can show off her witchy Mage goodness? I hope she kicks some serious DeathEater ass!

I like the Harry/Ginny aspect if it is kept as a side story. The main focus is Severus/Megan and I like their relationship better. Could you please throw some romance Hermione\'s way. She deserves it. I also appreciate that you don\'t have Severus with Hermione. It is getting a little overdone.

Is Victor Krum going to join to physically condition the kids or as a love interest for Hermione? What about good ole dependable Ron? Poor schlub...

Was a bit confused when \"Snape\" was making rounds after being injured. But then it made sense once I read further. Love how complex you have made his character...his wanting to absorb the pain as a way of compensating for his past. Can\'t wait to see what is in store for them and how the battle will shape up.

Thank you, that cleared it all up nicely. This chapter was excellent, Malfoy is such a snake! Sorry for being confused, I am reading about five different stories right now and sometimes switching back and forth can be disorienting. Keep up th egood work.

Ohhh...ahhh...wwwoowww! ahem...excuse me whilst I go change my underwear...panites suffered embarressingly from that chapter....

Sorry I missed reviewing the last update...damn kids...damn uni...damn assignments...

You are a true story teller...imagery was magnificent, beautiful, erotic...yada yada yada..

In eager anticipation of more

Shem xxx