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by cherylzv

person lilyadar
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really sorry that I haven\'t reviewed in some time, I barely have time to write my own fics.
I really love this pairing ... Megan seems perfect for Snape.

~l.a.~
person Estrilda
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So glad you\'re back. Yeah!
person Droxy
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated this story. \"smiles\"

I really like the way Harry got mad. Snape and Waters stressing over more work. Hmm, interesting converation between Bill and Charlie.

Your dialog is very well done.

Looking forward to your next post.

person Barrie
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I am so glad you finally got another cha up, up, I love this fic soooooo much!. I liked the Tonks idea, it is such a logical next step. All of Megan\'s tactics are very Sun Tsu, makes me happy! It\'s so nice to see someone thinking through things and being logical about how things would proceed.

I loved Krum\'s little Bulgarian rip at Severus, very funny. Looks like Neville has a new lab partner in Herbology too, heh heh!

Friendlyquark
person Barrie
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Take as long as you need to, we will be happy to wait. I liked the image of Severus and Megan with their ankles hooked aorund each others, that was sweet and yet not sacharine-sweet. Poor Hermione, Ron is a sweetie, but Victor sounds like a man. sigh, choices, choices.
person elfinbride
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I love that your ma the the other romantic plots too. Would love to see more Hermione and Viktor, maybe there can be love for them too? Also love Megan an Sev, more please. ^-^
person droxy
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. I\'ve been looking at this waiting for an update.

I like the way you handle to romance between the kids, it is realistic considering real life and thier ages.

Is HG going to get any lemonaide?
person droxy
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi-

What a nice romance you have here. It is well written with decent pacing. I like some of the suprises you put in the story. I think its sweet they are getting married, but it all going to well for me to be fooled there is going to be a happy ending here....

Anyhow, I look forward to your new posts.
person Estrilda
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Thank you for stopping the part of S taking torture upon himself. It was the only part that I really didn\'t like.
person Magdelena
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I swear this story is more addictive than caffeine. My only complaint is: Much too short!! Hee Hee! I can\'t wait to see what you do with Viktor. I\'ve actually been re-reading book 4 myself, and I have to admit, sometimes I get sucked into seeing the world from 14 year old Harry\'s point of view. Hmmm, Herm-own-ninny might have some issues to work out with ole Viktor. But more importantly, I can\'t wait for the details of Megan\'s plan.

Keep updating.

Maggie