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person Darsina (Captain Anderson)
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Darsina (Captain Anderson)
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Samantha L.
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rapunzel -

I have been following your story for a couple of weeks now but didn\'t want to leave a review until I had caught up to you. I really love the story and think that your OC is brilliant. I personally like seeingtrontrong femine character and think that you do a good job ncinncing her out and making her realistic in the role she is supposed to have. You lay out an idea that makes you think one way but then later it unfolds about what it really is! I like that in a story and you have hooked me into checking back here to see how things turn out. I also love the details, you let us see a side of Snape that they don\'t talk about enough in the books, him hiding under the blankets was so funny and so sad. The love scenes are very good, nice to read and also what I imagine would be in character. I wish you had more Lupin, but that is just because I like him a lot in general. Excellent Story!

SLL
person Droxy
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow- Viktor is intense, can HG handle him?

I download your updates as I find them. TV here is a bit..different, bhen hen again I rather read fan fic.

Need update on Potions Master, he isn\'t doing very well.

What was the dark arts m tha that affected Harry.

Angsty funrerals with Snape attending????
person Mary Beth
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!

I was waiting for the HG/VK connection, lol. Well done lemons as usual, they are steamy and well writtne. Iam glad to have some happy stuff going on in all the sadness. Please update soon, I check all the time to see what happens next.
person Estrilda
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but I would really appreciate more Hermione and Viktor, please!!!! Your Viktor is such a great character.
person Debbie
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh - it sounds kind of creepy digging up your OC. Great lemons in the chapter with Hr and VK.
person Magdelena
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Sev\'s reaction to needing to save Harry. Precious!! Beautiful job handling Viktor and Hermione. BTW I think you are doing an excellent job handling the angst. Never cheesy, just fabulous!!

Take care. I\'ve got to head off to a Mardi Gras Parade. Life in New Orleans is never dull during this time of year. LOL!!!!!!

Maggie
person Droxy
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just discov you you updated! I am in India and internet access for me is spotty. Please forgive late reviews.

Angsty chapters. Wow Harry saves Snape so they are even? Do I still get an angsty funeral since characters died?

So there is still hope for a happy ending for some of the characters. Waiting to see whats wrong with Harry and did Snape off Malfoy? IS Voldemort really gone?

Please update soon, I can\'t take the cliffies.
person Magdelena
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh the poor Weasley family. And Fred! To lose a twin has got to be like losing a part of yourself. I\'m so glad you only bumped off one Weasley. I get so sad when an author does a \"Saving Private Ryan\" deal and kills all off but one!

And drawing out the angst!!! Sigh. (More guilt, more guilt, more guilt!!!) I feel like I\'m watching a soap opera...tomorrow on As Hogwarts Turns...will Harry come out of his coma...how will the Weasleys deal with their losses...will Megan reappear from the ground...Tee hee.

More seriously..loved the update. Keep up the good work.

Maggie