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Glad you finally updated, I really love this relationship. Loved the hospital scene. Very emotional.

Now about the dark mark...I\'ll contact you in email or write me at mine listed above. I got a report due soon so I need a few days. I hope that is OK.

Hopefully we will see more Harry and Ginny action and more HG and Viktor action too.

I am so waiting for the wedding to have a ntotatotally romantic ending! I also can\'t wait for the releif factor to hit Albus and Megans parents.

Overall, you managed to combine a lot of plot elements in this story...the war, smut =>, romance, angst, and hurt-comfort.

More SS-OC kissing please, once she gets better. => => =>

You\'ve done a damn good job! This is absolutely the best thing I have ever red. Write more, I want more! Chapter 38 isn\'t the last one, is it? I hoot. ot. Pleeeaasee hurry with the next one!

I really have enjoyed this story. I love OC characters because it expands JKR\'s wonderful universe. I particularly like the Hermione/Victor pairing -- what a delightful couple. Waiting anxiously for your next update.

Yay you! I didn\'t know how long it would be till your update bu'mgl'mglad I checked. Megan is finally getting better, what a reilef, now they can be together. I like how you showed how he missed her so much. Why is Harry going off by himself so much, isn\'t Ginny there to comfor him? Why is Ron going to live with Fred?

OOOOH glad you updated.

So it looks like a happy ending is coming. I like that Snape now has grey hair, he\'s been through a lot. I really enjoyed all the angst you put SS through (Sniff).

I was hoping Harry would take solace with GW. Is our bossy HG going to show VK who\'s boss? Is SS going chew Megan\'s head off for keeping secrets?

Now that Voldie is dead, what happens to SS dark mark?

Really enjoying this well written story with OC.

Oh I am so happy. So happy for Severus too.
Megan\'s wedding gift was lovely. Touching moment when Severus was able to open the music box. Very bittersweet.
(claps hands) They will be together again soon.

i really liked the use of the pensive even though at first i wasnt sure if it could relly happen like that. but then i remembered that they can sit in chairs in them so why not lay on beds too! i am blown away to get such a wonderful character of snape. most stories make him too bad or too good but you make him beautiful and make me remember why i like him. his crying made me so sad but it was real. dont wait to long to bring megan back please, we are waiting!

Hi, I have been enjoying your story from the beginning and was thrilled to see that you are still working on it. s afs afraid you were going to leave us all with no ending :)

Arthur\'s thoughts about the Ministry job seem very accurate to that circumstance, but it was odd that Fudge was allowed to speak at this event, given the political situation.
It is gratifying to see Snape get his medals, and good seeing Megan\'s parents at the ceremony. I was surprised like Harry to see nothing for Hermione or Ron. The gift Megan\'s mother gave to Snwas was wonderful, showing the secret photo of the kiss ( how sneaky of her Parents ;>), but also emotionallenchenching to someone lSnapSnape.
Snape managing to keep it together for the ceremony isn\'t a surprise, but in private is where I would expect Snape to completely succumb to the grief.
Having been though my fair share of funerals, the private reaction of Snape at the end is much more accurate of people in the grieving state- the unstoppable crying and emotions.
Mixing the award ceremony with the memorial seems to dampen the funeral effects. But the memorial implies the funerals were already held prior.
Good writing and great details. Please don\'t let our poor PM suffer much longer.

Poor Severus, so sad. That was a beautiful ceremony, and again, you handled everyone from the wizards to the magical creatures so beautifully that nary a one was neglected. I\'m so glad that you touched on Megan\'s special relationship with Firenze, and thought of the two twins being the only ones who would truly understand their loss. These little extras are what make your story so special.

Take your time, we\'ll be here patiently awaiting the next installment.

Maggie