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by cherylzv

person droxy
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!!!
person innocent camels
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How I ever got my rocks off
Prophet Muhammad and Paedophilia+Some sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini

From "The Life of Muhammad"

After Khadijah died, Muhammad dreamed that he was to marry A'isha, the daughter of Abu Bakr. She was six (6!) and he was fifty. But firstly he married the widow Sawdah who was very motherly towards his children and, a few months later, to his child bride A'isha. She continued to play with her dolls for several years until, at the age of nine, her marriage was consummated.

Rights of the Child (contd)
10 Aug. '00 Reformers in the Iranian parliament are seeking to raise the age of marriage for girls from 9 to 14 and boys from 15 to16. Currently the girl's age is determined by the A'isha/Muhammad marriage. She was six and he was fifty - he did "wait" until she was nine to consummate the marriage

Penetration of young girls can seriously damage their reproductive organs, let alone any psychological harm it can do. The high maternal mortality rate can be directly attributed to this practice. Also children need time to have a childhood and also study.

For more on pedophilia "Sayings of Khomeini" . Warning the words of this "holy" man may cause you to vomit. Their authenticity has been verified. (See links on article.)

Some Sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini

Ayatollah Khomeini:
A man can have sexual pleasure from a child as young as a baby. However he should not penetrate, sodomising the child is OK (Huray for Khomeini, what say you to that, my fellow firm believers?). If the man penetrates and damages the child then he should be responsible for her subsistence all her life. This girl, however does not count as one of his four permanent wives (Join Islam: fuck them raw and get away with it!). The man will not be eligible to marry the girls sister. (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990, Excerpt: Page [1])

It is better for a girl to marry in such a time when she would begin menstruation at her husband's house rather than her father's home. Any father marrying his daughter so young will have a permanent place in heaven (and seventy more virgins to take in bloody sodomy!). (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990 [Mohammad (founder of Islam) The Pedophile])

A man can have sex with animals such as sheep, cows, camels and so on. However he should kill the animal after he has his orgasm. He should not sell the meat to the people in his own village, however selling the meat to the next door village should be fine (11!!). (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990)

"If one commits the act of sodomy with a cow, a ewe, or a camel, their urine and their excrement become impure, and even their milk may no longer be consumed. The animal must then be killed and as quickly as possible and burned." (The little green book, Sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini, Political, Phylosophica, Social and Religious with a special introduction by Clive Irving, ISBN number 0-553-14032-9, page 47)


Marriage with children
person droxy
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please update
person InuYasha\'s Girl
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue
person Apothecaria
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Rapunzel. I was going to rec this story in the sycophanthex forums, and noticed that the text in some of the chapters has been degraded. No offense to this site, but I wonder if you would like to restore this story and move it to http://occlumency.sycophanthex.com where you can find some new and I`m sure highly appreciative readers.
Cheers,
Apothecaria
person droxy
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update please!!!
person Sineed
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I just discovered your story a few days ago and have been reading it when I can. Good storytelling! And your writing became more sophisticated over the course of the story. I\'m a very picky Sevage, and you\'ve done a great job of keeping Snape in character, like his reaction to the request to help Harry. And the white in his hair is perfect; of course he can\'t express himself, so his stress is revealed in some physical .
A.
And the lemons fit in perfectly. The one with thnsiensieve is a heartbreaker.
person droxy
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh thanks, so romantic.
person jenna
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t leave many reviews, but in your case I will make an exception. Despite my concerns about the overwhelmng strength and goodness of your OC - which leaves one to wonder where any tension in their story will be - In Need is so well written and hought out that I finished. Let me just say how glad I am that I did - the intricacy is amazing and the story is one of the best I have read, and I have read a lot of them. Your people are heros and their story is inspiring. POints that I would have tension with would be resolved several chapters later, ofte in undexpected ways. I see now her pressure to be so good and the fragile layer underneath. I like your OC very much and espcially now look forward to seeing the ways Megan and Severus will be together in a new way. I hope that you will break down some of her walls so they can truly be together.
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a simply marvelous chapter. I love the way you\'ve kept Sev in character while still showing his devotion to Megan. And the McDonald\'s reference was priceless. Glad your school year has finally come to a close. But your story is always worth waiting for.

Maggie