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for The Last Man on Earth

by AureliaFlint

person kare
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it! update soon!
person anon
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story just keeps getting better, i can\'t wait for the next chapter!!! please don\'t take too long to update.
person rubberduck
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a chapter. a little bit of intrigue and a little bit of pretty hot sex. good combination. i very much like how loving the flint\'s are in this chapter. in previous chapters, you had them very elite and aristocratic and i didn\'t think there was much love between them. this proved me wrong and i\'m glad. very nicely done.
person zephiey
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A lovely chapter. I enjoyed a look at how well Flint\'s parents get along. Marcus better watch out, older brothers tend to hit first and ask questions later.

Tina
person Jorrn
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was just so sweet at the end. I love the part where Aurelius mentioned smelling
home. A different look into the relationship of Marcus\' parents. Though he has
cheated on his wife, it does appear that he does have some feelings of tenderness
toward her. Hope that he takes a leaf out of Marcus\' book and decides to be
faithful to her. Love the tidbit about the Quidditch memorabilia. Very inventive!
person rubberduck
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just thought of a name you might like to consider for your sequel. that is if you haven\'t found anything yet. since this one is called \"the last man on earth\", i thought the sequel might be called \"the only man on earth\". she is marrying the guy after all. just a thought.
person Sandra
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So will this be your last chapter? I kinda dont think that it ended on a good note. Probably because it ended on a question...even though there is going to be a sequel. I\'m looking forward for some more. The e the thing with Marcus and Katie seems to be wrapping up to a close, which sucks, but i\'m sure you will continue to make there story interesting and entertaining. I have faith in your writting skills. I\'m more interested in the 4 way relationships going on. That wieverever get boring, its just to much fun to read about.

Your faithful reader and reviewer,

Sandra
person whatever
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW
that was one of the most captivating soaps i have ever in my chance to read.
kudos to you
person Skyler Sage
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowwie... for someone who only planned to write a bit of brainless fun smuttiness... this had turned into one hell of a damn good story!! You\'re plots make me bow beforee, ee, your character descriptions are fantastic, and good grief, you are an ace when it comes to our fave characters having hot sex left and right!! XD I can\'t WAIT to see what happens in the Sequel. As for a title... Hmmm... \"For Whom the Wedding Bell Tolls\" and \"\'Til Death Do Us Part\" are my votes/suggestions. Although the second one sounds a bit more moribid than your writing tends to be, but I\'ve seen it going in a slightly more serious direction, so perhaps it shall fit.

Oh, and I say this: Angelina has a death wish. She\'s having virtually cheating thoughts on the man her best friend loves... and she\'s got a hot man who loves her already!!! NOT FAIR!!!! Ter, be the smart one here and GET BACK WITH ALICIA!!!!!

Okay, done ranting. XD Write on, and update soon!!!
person SolitaryAries
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well considering that you started it as just a random shot at fluff, it\'s brilliant :-D Even without considering that, it\'s f*cking amazing. As for that sequel title, The Luckiest Man on Earth? Just a thought. Keep up the incredible work!