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for The Last Man on Earth

by AureliaFlint

person LilyMarielle
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!!!11 PLEASE! YOU SHOULD MAKE TERRY AND ALICIA GO BACK!!! I CAN\'T HANDLE THAT THEY ARE NOT TOGETHER!!!!! PLEASE! PLEASE! OH AND BY THE WAY...ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL STORY!
person Jorrn
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a killer chapter! Don\'t mind the cliffie as long as you update soon so we aren\'t
kept in suspense! Hope all is well with Katie. Love the points you are still ponng
ng
over. I do hope that Aurelius does indeed start to realize that he truly loves his wife
and will take steps to prove so. I am not too sure about the quadrangle with Angie
Allie, Terry, and Adrian. Think it will only end in heart ache if they keep this on.
Look forward to the last chapter as well as the sequel. Love the title for the sequel!!
person rubberduck
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
geez. how hot can you get? that scene with terry and angie was smoking. i don\'t know what it is about illicit trysts. the naughtiness? the intense heat? whatever it is, it gets the pulse pounding. geez that makes me sound bad. i better stop. i hope katie is alright. i doubt you would hurt her permanently as she is your leading lady, but this does raise concern. i can\'t wait mor more.
person Amy
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!!!!!!!

I swear i had my hand closed over my mouth reading that last bit!

*Breath in, breath out!*

Fook me! You sure know how to leave me hanging dear!

Is the baby going to be ok?

Jesus listen to me! I sound like I actually know Marcus and Katie!

*Wonders off talkng to self like a loon on loon tablets*

Oh!

*Coms back*

Cool name for the sequel! Very suave!

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person jkrazed
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great one! Very excited about the sequel... it feels like starting over!
person Anjel Rocker
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhangers are always good... :) it gives us a reason to read more of your awesome story. I love the name for the new fiction... amazing that the first chapter could blossom into such a great story... anyways your doing an awesome job... keep it up! *smiles*

Anjel Rocker Does Want These Stupid Comment Things At The End Of Her Review! Or Does She?
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I Hope everything is okay with Katie. And the whole thing with Terry/Ally/Adrian/Angie is so confusing. I still want it to be Terry/Alnd And Angie/Adrian.

~~Jilly
person Skyler Sage
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I. Am. Going. To. CRY!!!

**sobs hysterically**

Please, please, PLEASE have Terry get with Ally!! PLEEEEEEEASE!!! Angie and Adrian had such a strong bond... for them it wasn\'t just sex, it was that they shared something deeper. Angie and Ter are just hot for each other. It\'s JUST sex. They\'re both going to destroy their friendships for it.

I do think Marcus\' father should realize he DOES love his wife... and I\'d LOVE to see Katie\'s brothers meeting Marcus... and the explosions that follow. XD
person shaolin
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
once again...Bravo!! I know I\'ve reviewed
this story a million times, but had to let you know
how much I love it!!!
person Amy
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww, Aurelius is so sweet! Yet so fucking lovely! lol

Brill chapter sweetie! I can\'t wait till Katie\'s bro\'s mMarcMarcus.
Should be funny.

Update soon m\'dear!

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