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I. Love. You. No, really, I\'m serious...

Not only did you manage to slide in the fantasy rape bit, but you also had a Marcus \"defending\" Katie moment, some good ol\' mushiness and love confessions, AND you had Ter/Ali.

I am one happy kitty. XD

So... when\'s the next chapter? LOL **crosses fingers and hopes for more Ter/Ali**

Thanks for another awesomapteapter!

This has got to be my favorite fan fic of all times. I don\'t know what it is about your Katie and Marcus but... it is so fucking hot! And you\'re a great writer. I don\'t remember seeing any misspelled words or screwed up sentences. And I just love the Sytherin/Gryffindor bit so this is just very, very appealing to me. At first I thought there weren\'t going to be any couples besides Katie/Marcus and... well, there is alot going on now. The conflict is just... like \"wow.\" But there is ONE thing that has been going through my head (since you brought Draco\'s name into the fic). Now, I\'ve never been that much of a Draco/Ginny shipper but its really starting to grow on me... and I think adding a little Draco/Ginny would be pretty good. But thats just my opinion. Its great the way it is now though.

-Alana

Damn, that sounded final! Noooooooo! Anyways, glad to see that all the Gryffie girls theitheir Slytherins!

Good grief! That was quite a chapter. Oh those wicked Slytherins having their wicked influence! Now Angelina sees what she has been missing and why Alicia and Katie are so happy! Can\'t wait to see what Katie has in store for Marcus!

I\'m going to go backwards. I was sorta laughing during the Marcus-Draco conversation, not because the content was funny but the fact Marcus gives Draco Malfoy advice and seems really brotherly. That amused me greatly. Also the Marcus/Katie love? Fluffy but I knew it was going to happen eventually. But the Terry/Alicia action in the storeroom was hot stuff. Damn. All these Slytherins and Gryffs shagging, it\'s hot and fun. I love how consistent you are in your updates. Till the next time.

Yeah! Marcus finally tells Katie he loves her...in typical Marcus fashion. But still just as thrilling. My my, those sexy Slytherins! I love Marcus giving Draco advice...perhaps Draco will go for a quiet Gryff himself, then he won\'t be as vulnerable to Billy\'s seductions! And Billy...boy is she in for a shock. I can\'t wait to see where Katie fights off Billy and claims her man!

It\'s getting more and more interesting! Yay! It would be really sweet if Alicia and Terence were to get together. I like him calling her Ally, it makes them seem more... together I guess. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. As usual, I\'m hooked. ;)

Whew that\'s a lot of stuff to pack into two chapters!!

What a game for the two of them to play. I figured somebody would bust them but it had to be Oliver. Well Katie kinda thought about letting him catch her and Marcus at one point. I bet he\'s giving her hell before she meetswithwith Flint again tonight. And they sis their \'I love you\'s\' very sweet.

I like Marcus\'s plan for keeping Billy off of Katie\'s trail. I do wonder what he has planned for Katie later...

I like the other Chaser segments you thrown in there as well.

On a side note... was there any particular reason behind Katie doing all four of the Quidditch Team Captains??? Looks like Flint wasn\'t the only one with a bet or to-do list.... and will she ever find out about it.

Can\'t wait to read more but these chapters should tied me over until later..

Many thanks.

Lessa
I define kinky as just being sexually creative

Great chapter! I have been hoping for Billy and Katie face-off or just the point where Billy finds out it\'s Katie. By this chapter, I guess I won\'t have to wait much longer. I am also wondering about the bet and what Katie will think when she finds out. I love this couple now! I\'m still hooked. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!