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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GRAAAAAAAH!!!! DAMN YOU REAL LIFE FOR KEEPING ME AWAY FROM THIS FIC!!!!!
**screams and rants some more**
**pants** Okay... WAY too many chapters to catch up, so I can\'t review them all, but I have to say this is coming out fecking BRILLIANT. I\'m curious as to whether this was your plan from the get-go? Did you always know the fic was going to end up where it is, or did this start as an excuse to have lots of loving sex between those loffly Slytherin boys and the Gryffindor Chasers and develope into something more as you went on? Either way, the twists and turns, the character developement and descriptions only get better and better with each chapter. I LOVED the parental background with Katie and Marcus\' parents, the whole polical bit working in quite nicely, and the just pure devotion between Katie and Marcus. (The way he\'s so protective of her and the baby? **SWOONS**) I must admit, I miss a little of the naughty sex the students would have, but I wouldn\'t trade it for the world, not with all this excellent story!!
One thing though: Pleasepleasepleaseplease let Ter and Ali get back together. PLEASE!!! Name your price, I\'ll pay it -- what do I have to do to get you to let them be together!!! **weeps hysterically**
Okay, I\'m done now. XD Carry on m\'dear!!
**screams and rants some more**
**pants** Okay... WAY too many chapters to catch up, so I can\'t review them all, but I have to say this is coming out fecking BRILLIANT. I\'m curious as to whether this was your plan from the get-go? Did you always know the fic was going to end up where it is, or did this start as an excuse to have lots of loving sex between those loffly Slytherin boys and the Gryffindor Chasers and develope into something more as you went on? Either way, the twists and turns, the character developement and descriptions only get better and better with each chapter. I LOVED the parental background with Katie and Marcus\' parents, the whole polical bit working in quite nicely, and the just pure devotion between Katie and Marcus. (The way he\'s so protective of her and the baby? **SWOONS**) I must admit, I miss a little of the naughty sex the students would have, but I wouldn\'t trade it for the world, not with all this excellent story!!
One thing though: Pleasepleasepleaseplease let Ter and Ali get back together. PLEASE!!! Name your price, I\'ll pay it -- what do I have to do to get you to let them be together!!! **weeps hysterically**
Okay, I\'m done now. XD Carry on m\'dear!!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! But I had a couple of questions.
\"I\'ll show you,\" purred Adrian. \"And Angelina.\"
\"What?\" asked Angelina as she reluctantly began to search for the potion.
What potion was she looking for and is it really Angelina?
\"I\'ll show you,\" purred Adrian. \"And Angelina.\"
\"What?\" asked Angelina as she reluctantly began to search for the potion.
What potion was she looking for and is it really Angelina?
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great last chapter.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! AMAZING!!! YOU ROCK!!!
Anjel Rocker Loves Talking In The Third Person!
Anjel Rocker Loves Talking In The Third Person!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you never seem to let your audience down. at least that\'s my opinion. your story is so good. marcus is so loving to katie but still has his slytherin edge. it was a very hot scene between them in the halls. poor alicia though. her and higgs seem to be in rough waters. it doesn\'t look good for them. i\'m wondering though. do you have a set plot or are you just writing away, seeing wthere the story goes? either way, hurry up with the next chapter. please.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Katie and Marcus are getting married! YAY!
I\'m just waiting for someone to see the ring on Katie\'s finger, Then the Hogwarts
Rumour Mill will go to work.
x
Hope you had a lovely New Year, I know I did!
I\'m just waiting for someone to see the ring on Katie\'s finger, Then the Hogwarts
Rumour Mill will go to work.
x
Hope you had a lovely New Year, I know I did!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good job! update soon!
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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey!
i must say u owe you a review after reading all these chapters of yours. You are one of the few writers who write about marcus and katie. It is really hard to find fics about those two. you craft a well writen story with plot and seduction. Most stories are just seduction or pwp\'s. i can tell this fic is going to reach the end and it really makes me sad because that i means i have to go find another marcus/katie fic. o well do update soon. =]
i must say u owe you a review after reading all these chapters of yours. You are one of the few writers who write about marcus and katie. It is really hard to find fics about those two. you craft a well writen story with plot and seduction. Most stories are just seduction or pwp\'s. i can tell this fic is going to reach the end and it really makes me sad because that i means i have to go find another marcus/katie fic. o well do update soon. =]
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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey! i love this story and always glad when u post new chapters, i cant wait 2 read the next part of ur story hop hope that u dont abandon this story.
-SnowboardAngl13
-SnowboardAngl13
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good chapter! give us some more!