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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very hot. Okay, I liked that a LOT. I know I\'m not displaying the best grammatical abilities right now, but I would really like to be your beta reader if you\'ll let me.
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schedule
August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hm....so was so hot...damn unbelievable! lol
schedule
August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have read alot of slah and this is a very good story....right to the point! LOL Do you have one where you took a little more time with the plot. This is great but I think that one with a slower would be soooo very erotic! Great writing!!!