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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT UM UM WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats it u cruel author akkkkkkkk! very good fic i must say cuz its one of the best ive read concerning snape and harry most of \'em are horrible if i say so myself but this one was so real fealing geeze and to end it like that poowie!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s very interesting, and very in character.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Hot damn you write Severus well. Not many people do, you know. You\'ve captured his complications, his hatreds, confusions, jelousy\'s and obsessions over Harry just beautifully.
Standing ovation from me!!!!
Standing ovation from me!!!!
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! I just found this fic and it\'s brilliant! But it\'s from last summer! Are you going to write more? Please!
I\'ve never read a fic as good as this--you\'ve raised the bar so far that it\'s almost invisible!
btw, Spike should definitely fuck the shit out of xander ;P
I\'ve never read a fic as good as this--you\'ve raised the bar so far that it\'s almost invisible!
btw, Spike should definitely fuck the shit out of xander ;P
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Just...excellent. What amazed me the most is that for nearly the entire fic both Harry and Snape were so very much in character. I mean, they practically were canon. Their physical descriptions were spot on, neither Harry nor Snape magically acquired silky hair and muscle bound bodies, which makes this so much more believable. Also, your insights into these characters are spot-on, ie: the way Harry reacts to Snape\'s questions, comparing the Marauders treatment of Snape to his rivalry with Draco, and also the way Snape regards Harry, and his conflicting feelings towards him.
The one scene I found out of character was when Harry put his palm on Snape\'s cheek, and then only because I couldn\'t see why he would choose to do this. Everything before and after I accepted, but right then I read that bit and thought, \'why did he do that? He wouldn\ust ust touch Snape like that.\' I feel weird pointing out this minor \"flaw\" given that this is the most in character Snape/Harry fic I\'ve ever come across. I especially liked the ending, which was just so different and so much more realistic than I had expected. I mean, if these characters were real people in this position, it is highly unlikely theie nie night of wankage would have suddenly and immediately developped into a loving relationship the very next morning. You are the first author that seems to address this issue realistically, and Snape\'s words and thoughts at the table were perfect. One last thing I have to comment on is how funny this was. When they first enter Snape\'s bedroom and sort of star at each other, \"Do you want me to? Yes!\" - priceless! And then the next morning, with Harry\'s Er\'s ::grin:: So all in all, this is the perfect fic: you\'ve got son con charactarisation, great dialogue, hot smut, and plenty of humor. Great job, I absolutely LOVED it (and sorry for the lengthy review).
The one scene I found out of character was when Harry put his palm on Snape\'s cheek, and then only because I couldn\'t see why he would choose to do this. Everything before and after I accepted, but right then I read that bit and thought, \'why did he do that? He wouldn\ust ust touch Snape like that.\' I feel weird pointing out this minor \"flaw\" given that this is the most in character Snape/Harry fic I\'ve ever come across. I especially liked the ending, which was just so different and so much more realistic than I had expected. I mean, if these characters were real people in this position, it is highly unlikely theie nie night of wankage would have suddenly and immediately developped into a loving relationship the very next morning. You are the first author that seems to address this issue realistically, and Snape\'s words and thoughts at the table were perfect. One last thing I have to comment on is how funny this was. When they first enter Snape\'s bedroom and sort of star at each other, \"Do you want me to? Yes!\" - priceless! And then the next morning, with Harry\'s Er\'s ::grin:: So all in all, this is the perfect fic: you\'ve got son con charactarisation, great dialogue, hot smut, and plenty of humor. Great job, I absolutely LOVED it (and sorry for the lengthy review).
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So well written I HATED to see it end!I dont care if you have slash on the brain or not, this is one of the better HP/SS pieces written to date. Soooo in character and such beautifully written emotions. I actually held my breath. More More More
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August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I am completly amazed at this story. I truly enjoyed your characterization of Harry and Severus. Very few of the fics actualy portray all the dislike and mistrust in eachothers personality after the sex. Most stories have a happy ever after in the aftermath. I love the way Snape says \"one misguided wank in the middle of the night doesn\'t change everything.\"
This was great and I truly enjoyed i
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*off to look for more of your fics*
This was great and I truly enjoyed i
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*off to look for more of your fics*
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great stuff, love how you\'ve kept Snape mean!
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was VERY well done...wow....Is this story complete? I didn\'t notice. If it isn\'t, I think it would be great just to leave where it is now, with uncertainty and mixed feelings. I especially like how you kept true to the characters. Most people who write these stories with Severus and Harry tend top end it off on a happy, satisfied note, but the way you have done it is actually very realistic and at the same time different. Once again, very well done! Please write some more soon!