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August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapters 4 and 5 and I enjoyed
them very much. I also read you author\'s
note and am very enticed by what you had
to say.
School has started up for me again, so I
am having a difficult time reading all of the
updates. Don\'t worry if you post without me
reviewing. I am still following the story, but
I only havme tme to check aff.net once a week.
Hugs,
Corazon
PS
Thanks for reviewing my story!
them very much. I also read you author\'s
note and am very enticed by what you had
to say.
School has started up for me again, so I
am having a difficult time reading all of the
updates. Don\'t worry if you post without me
reviewing. I am still following the story, but
I only havme tme to check aff.net once a week.
Hugs,
Corazon
PS
Thanks for reviewing my story!
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August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for that. Yes the story will be completed, this may take a few months, bhe phe plot thickens as you get into chapter six (which I am currently writing). The idea of Fate Has Different Plans is rather complex, it explores the emotions to the utmost of both characters, the ending is rather shocking. It climaxes, every chapter takes one step further. Some of the people who read this may get confused, the metaphorical language will increase and lead into more depths.
Through every chapter you slowly see the true colours of Ophelia.
The message I\'m trying to pass through is rather simple. Ophelia is in the beginning seen as the light and Snape as the darkness, but as you go through it more it swaps. It\'s a sybolism of darkness and light. (I\'m contemplating on changing the y tiy title.)
-Blue Ribbon
Through every chapter you slowly see the true colours of Ophelia.
The message I\'m trying to pass through is rather simple. Ophelia is in the beginning seen as the light and Snape as the darkness, but as you go through it more it swaps. It\'s a sybolism of darkness and light. (I\'m contemplating on changing the y tiy title.)
-Blue Ribbon
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August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like both your fics they are more original than most of other Snapefics however I`m such a devoted Snapelover that read all kind of fics about him,have to admit your work is enjoyable because of ideas of plots-I hope you develope them to very interesting pieces of writing,I like smut yet with good plot it`s more admirable.Ophelia as an Auror involved with Snape-this is a good idea,brings this love-hate,friend-enemy realationship and hope for long,well-written and created story in.I have had the same thoughts reading your other story-A Dreary World-so I had hopes you are going to write both stories to the very end(sorry,I heartfully hate the unfinished fics which I`ve enjoyed).
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August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thank you for that, hopefully there will be many more reviews as kind as yours...
-Blue Ribbon
-Blue Ribbon
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I like the way you conviniently put
these two together. Her thoughts were great,
especially the box of un use contraceptives! I will
patiently for the next chapter.
Hugs,
Corazon
these two together. Her thoughts were great,
especially the box of un use contraceptives! I will
patiently for the next chapter.
Hugs,
Corazon
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: This was a very powerful yet bitter
sweet chapter. It diffinately caught my
attention.
Chapter 2: Your writing is superb. You
have a way of slowly building up of what\'s
ome.ome. Your Auror is a very storng character.
Very suitable for Severus.
I am looking forward to chapter
3!
Hugs,
Corazon
sweet chapter. It diffinately caught my
attention.
Chapter 2: Your writing is superb. You
have a way of slowly building up of what\'s
ome.ome. Your Auror is a very storng character.
Very suitable for Severus.
I am looking forward to chapter
3!
Hugs,
Corazon