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I like the beginning. It was hard to read at some parts because of the spelling slurrs, but it\'s not bad. Definitely something worth the effort to continue.

Dear readers:

I have taken away all the chapters I have created so far and one by one will put my edited work up. Thanks so much Rapunzel and red rose, you\'ve been a great help. Please review and tell me what you think of my work now that it is completely edited.

Lots of love,

ribbon :P

Hello there! With permission from Lily I am on her account right now correcting and editing to my liking her fan fic, which is to be shared between the both of us. I am going to be writing chapters nine and onwards with Lily. Lily (blueribbon) is leaving this to me. fanfiction.net will be hosting this fan fic under my name soon and I will be adding that Lily is part of this too.

The reasons for this are quite basic~

1. Lily has plenty to do and cannot be completely dedicated right now.
2. She needed someone to edit her work.
3. She bleieves her plot is side-tracking and together she thinks we can make it flow.
4. I am her buddy from uni and the both of us are taking a journalism and a creative writing course, this is why she believed I was best for the job.
5. I am also a fan fic writer.

I know this might seem sudden to all of her fans who love her work. Remember one thing though! LILY IS STILL WRITING THIS FAN FIC. I AM MERELY JUST COACHING AND HELPING HER WRITE WITH MY OWN IDEAS AS WELL.

~Celia (:x:redrose:x:)

Please don\'t give up on your story - I think that the concept and imagery are beautiful. I have emailed you with some further thoughts.

Best wishes,
R.

Hey there! Checking out Snapey sites and came across this. It\'s really good but I think it needs corrections.

:x:redrose:x:

I\'m what you\'d call having a writer\'s block~

Currently I have delayed greatly \'A Dreary World\', and am right now making the story-line in this fan fic go a little dull.
I\'m going to make the next chapter (Chapter Ten) really deep and very interesting. That\'s probably where you will see the rivers meeting, lets just put it that way.

If you have any questions, feel free to email me. Any suggestions will be accepted.

Also constructive criticism will be very welcomed. I know many of you have your doubts, and now is the time I\'d like to hear them.

~blue ribbon

This is very good so far! A few typing errors, but otherwise very smooth and entertaining.

Superb! Absolutely superb! Oh, and
I love the new title!

Hugs,
Corazon

I have changed the story title to something, which no doubt will have more to do with the storyline...\"The Engima of a Rose\"

-Blue Ribbon

This is a very well thought out story, full of detail. You\'ve put a lot of effort into this, and it clearlyws. ws. I noticed a couple of minor grammer mistakes, but above all the structure is very s. :. :-) Altogether, rather well done.