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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule
August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiya,
You have the definite priviledge of a *unique* storyline -- and that\'s not easy to find these days. : ) I am intrigued by your premise and look forward to seeing how you write out the two of them dealing with this event, especially given Snape\'s childhood trauma. I certainly enjoyed the first chapter.
Kiri
You have the definite priviledge of a *unique* storyline -- and that\'s not easy to find these days. : ) I am intrigued by your premise and look forward to seeing how you write out the two of them dealing with this event, especially given Snape\'s childhood trauma. I certainly enjoyed the first chapter.
Kiri
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Serverus needs to grow a set. PERIOD.
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!!! I can\'t wait to read more. Keep writing!!! I hope it ends happy!
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo!! I like it, I like it! Please continue! I can\'t wait!!
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting opening chapter. Will Snape be able to cope wtih what Hermione has become after his youthful experience at the hands, or should that be claws, of Lupin? I\'m looking forward to see how you develop the idea, so I hope you update soon. Thanks for writing.
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start, I can\'t wait to read more.
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!! That is a wonderful start to what seems to be a hugely promising story. I hope you update often, as i am waiting for the next installment now. Will he be able to get over the fact she is a werewolf and possibly find a way to cure her? You *are* gonna tell us how they got together , right? UPdate soon!!
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm...
actually, i don\'t think that they were as ooc as you consider them to be. i think you\'ve got snape down quite nicely; fighting with the prejuidices he\'s lived with his entire life, and indeed, has even supported, clashing with his love for hermione. and hermione... well, i don\'t think she\'d be quite stupid enough to try to patch a werewolf up, but i do think that she probably wouldn\'t be able to get away from a werewolf, wand or no. sorry, just don\'t.
and dumbledore? you\'ve got the meddling old git down perfectly.
the only thing that i really noticed was that you might want to wait a bit and reread your stories before posting them. i noticed a few typos, but they were the annoying ones that are spelled correctly and are therefore not picked up by a spellchecker. (there was an \"ever\" rather than an \"every\" somewhere in there...)
can\'t wait to see where you\'re going with this; i think that snape needs to confront his fears.
cheers!
hellfire
actually, i don\'t think that they were as ooc as you consider them to be. i think you\'ve got snape down quite nicely; fighting with the prejuidices he\'s lived with his entire life, and indeed, has even supported, clashing with his love for hermione. and hermione... well, i don\'t think she\'d be quite stupid enough to try to patch a werewolf up, but i do think that she probably wouldn\'t be able to get away from a werewolf, wand or no. sorry, just don\'t.
and dumbledore? you\'ve got the meddling old git down perfectly.
the only thing that i really noticed was that you might want to wait a bit and reread your stories before posting them. i noticed a few typos, but they were the annoying ones that are spelled correctly and are therefore not picked up by a spellchecker. (there was an \"ever\" rather than an \"every\" somewhere in there...)
can\'t wait to see where you\'re going with this; i think that snape needs to confront his fears.
cheers!
hellfire