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Um...not to be mean but did you have a beta for this? And Hemophiliac is when you don't have enough white blood cells to close cut/wounds and means thst you could bleed to death from a small cut if you don't get help. Just thought I'd say that. If you need a beta I could do it for you. Just offering.

The first and second chapter was great!! but in the third one seemed like you kind of slacked... So are you going to continue this story?

Now, see I was just blowin' up the review board all this time wit the idea when if I'd read carefully the author's not said to EMAIL you. lol. So special I am. So I'll do it, sending the other reviews with it

AY,man, why u aint update yet ? i told u could use my idea under the name ofboneboneDyme, which is now RedboneShawty07. Now i got a fanfic posted, titled "New Developements". I MIGHT need to use my own idea for and up and coming fic Lucius/Draco. So the offer still limited time only. (^.^) but still its all love; im just anxious ya kno, ya get me going and just stop writing all together. oh yes, im recommending your storey to all thru my own.

AY,man, why u aint update yet ? i told u could use my idea under the name of RedboneDyme, which is now RedboneShawty07. Now i got a fanfic posted, titled "New Developements". I MIGHT need to use my own idea for and up and coming fic Lucius/Draco. So the offer still limited time only. (^.^) but still its all love; im just anxious ya kno, ya get me going and just stop writing all together. oh yes, im recommending your storey to all thru my own.

Waddup wit it ? How come u aint take my advice ? In fact when was the last time u even visited ur fic ? The Fanfics are like ya babies that need attention. I warned ya , imma take the idea fo my own up and coming fic.
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I SOOOO love how this goin! But might i suggest that Lucius allow Draco to go out on his broomstick, it starts raining then he comes in soaked and filthy. he goes and takes a shower. but in the shower he imagines Lucius there. use ur imagination wut happens here!! Draco snaps out of it, aroused and looks forward to a meeting with Lucius. And that should be the sex scene there in this 4th chapter.

RedboneDyme_#1

P.S. If u dont use it, I WILL. i\'ll have a fic out soon :-)

oh I got an idea, continue the story. :p okay, love love loved it.