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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! What a wonderful lemon. It was great. Loving this story so much.
Jen :)
Jen :)
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great except that when a man comes it does take about 15 minutes give or take for him to have an erection again. I couldn\'t quite believe she\'s give him a blowjob then he\'s fuck her. Trust me. Been there, done that. Doesn\'t quite work ;)
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great
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September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great
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August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I\'ve really been looking forward to your update. After I reviewed last chapter, I realised that you\'re the same Coriander that\'s over on Gryffindor Tower. I\'ve really enjoyed your work for a while, although this is only the second time I\'ve reviewed. I can\'t wait to see all Harry and Hermione move forward in their relationship here, and Hermione\'s acceptance of Harry, and everything! This story is really great. Once you\'ve completed this, I really hope that you finish your stuff over at the Hearthrug, as I\'ve really been wanting to see where you\'re going with it!! Keep up the great work!
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so looking forward to the next chapter of this! This really is a great story. It moves rather quickly, but your characterization of everyone and the emotions behind the actions are so accurate and real that the fast pace works. Please update soon! I\'m anxious to see the Weasley children\'s reactions, Hermione and Harry\'s date, and the continuation of their relationship. What a pity that Ron had to be such a selfish character for so long! His best friends could have been happy years ago!
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August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool story so far ..
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August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting story. I usually loathe anything that hints of any Ron & Hermione - Blech!
But, you have started this and given it sufficient back story, including Hermione & Ron, so that everything fits.
I love the way everyone has seen the writing on the wall about R & H\'s marriage. I love Draco trying to be a Dumbledore clone. Can\'t wait until I get to read about \"the date\"! Also love the voyuerism ;-)
But, you have started this and given it sufficient back story, including Hermione & Ron, so that everything fits.
I love the way everyone has seen the writing on the wall about R & H\'s marriage. I love Draco trying to be a Dumbledore clone. Can\'t wait until I get to read about \"the date\"! Also love the voyuerism ;-)
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was so beatifull, i hope that the story doesn\'t end there!
Besos
Besos
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like this.
so keep up the good work!
so keep up the good work!