rate_review Reviews

Before I get down the nitty gritty of what I think of this of this story in a critical manner, I wish to say that I do like this story. Now that that is over, the darkness of the story is a bit cliche don\'t you think? I am not trying to be mean, just saying that I have read about tweny different stories that are like this in several concepts.

Other then that, besides the darkness of this fic that most would say is competely cliche, I see that you have made your own niche out of it. The way this story differs is by bringing to root problems in Harry\'s life of abuse that would result in wanted to feel nothingness and death. Most who become abused in any sort manner do wish for that. The way you have Harry dealing or better yet not dealing with his pain is unique.

Another thing I wish to add is that the \"rommance\" of Harry and Draco is something I have not seen before. Instead of jumping into each others arms and finding love, these two are fighting tooth and nail to not be together except for the fact that outside forces mainly the fact that Draco will die, has forced them together. All in all, if something happened like this, I do believe Harry and Draco would act as you have them protrayed.

Now that that is done, lets get to part of why I have reviewed, Frankly even constant minor mistakes, this story is worthwhile to read. While it is not one of the best stories I have read it is also not one of the worst. I can see as the story has progressed that your putting more effort and tieing the story together in a cohesive format.

While I may not like the subject and protrayl of certain characters I will not reframe from calling a good story where I see one. You have tallent, work with it. I have found myself semi addicted to this story. I am curious as to how this story will follow and end. I am also severly confused about the shadows though. Perhaps something that be revealed later? Who are they and what do they want with Harry and what does Harry want them to do?

Btw no matter how harsh this review may seem, I do like your story and wish you to continue. Keep up the good work. Coolsa.

It was a good chapter. I actually read all you wrote but forgot to review, so that\'s what I\'m doing right now. I only ask for you to update as soon as possible.

Review date: {January 16, 2005}

Where\'s chapter 15?? Hey, UPDATE!! I WANNA READ CHAPTER 15!!!

NOrmally I love H/D stories particularly dark ones unfortunately i find it difficult to deal with bastard!draco and justasmuchofabastard!harry, just making clear this is NOT a flame I think it is an excellent story just not something i can deal with yet, i don\'t think life has thoroughly stripped me of my illusions yet...anyways i was wondering if you could recommend any decent dark!harry stories to me...

U go girl!!!!!! (or on the off chance your a boy sorry) lol I HATE Flamer`s don`t that have anything better to do ??? hu hu dont thay? ^__^thay have no life ......lol good job puting her in her place (or him whatever) ^__^

Am I ever up for Chapter 15! It seems like every chapter you write brings with it more questions that I\'m itching to have answered. Each chapter is more compelling than the last ... please, keep going!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! PLEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ this is the best story EVER!!!!!!!!! ^__^PLEZZZ more and if it`s not that much trubble could u E-mail me when u update (i have a horrable memory lol) ^__^ latta`s

YES!! MORE!!! God, this was so great... your fic glued me to the computer, I missed my lectures, have a splitting headache from hours of reading AND IF YOU DON\'T UPDATE SOON I\'LL SEND YOU AN ANASPOOR!!

I LOVED IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!! I NEED TO KNO WAT HAPPENS TO DUMBLEDORE AND RON AND HERMIONE... UPDAATTEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanx

I want moooooorrreee ^^

it was the BEST ever. I cant wait for the next chapeter. Its on the top of my bookmarks list. I love it!!!

keep on writing!! ^^