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for A Song Unsung

by Serenitas

person Ezekiel
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Barriers around one\'s heart does not work, love. If you really want to protect yourself, hurt them before they hurt you, but don\'t shut everyone out, because then you would be out of the loop and that would actually be a weakness to be exploited. One should always have a mask totally opposit to their real nature, a false appearence of innocence and goodiness if you will, that would make the people around you lower their own shields and let you in. One should find and identify one\'s own weakness before finding the weakness in others and file them away, waiting for a situation in which they can be use as blackmail.

Anyways, nice story.
person Jaimi
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok firts off i am loving this story it is more realistic then the other veela malfoy/potter stories. and as for your self esteem hun if people are trying to bring you down fuck them you have a huge resevoir of talent and i mean come on what do othr people oppions matter any way your a great writier and i am sure your a great person. if people can\'t see either then they are only waisting the air around you for those who appreciate you and what not. can\'t wait to read your next update and take care your doing great
person the1youhate
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yo! love ur story! kept me hooked! love that whole harry being pissed off at everyone thing! love it! plz write the 6th chapter! woah! im saying plz! omg! cya! keep writing!
person melissa
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DON\'T QUIT!!! this story is awesome. but tell me now, do draco & harry get together in this story at all? i mean, any slash soon? that would be great. thanx!
person lalalalala
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story; it\'s devilishly dark and sadistic...I love it. And, even though it\'s a pain to repeat over and over, you\'re not writing this for me or the other reviewers; you\'re writing it for you.
person water
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excelint. simply excelint. Please, PLEASE, write more soon
person melissa
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i say yes to chapter 5...i hope your day got better as it went along, if not, it\'ll get better eventually so don\'t worry about it.
person TheBloodDoll
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Confidence low? That shouldn\'t be possible with the way you write. This is a wonderful story and I hope the next chapter will be out soon. Especially if Harry does come out on top. ;)
person Pamela
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! WHY DID YOU STOP?!?!?!?! I absolutely LUUUURVE this story, and I can\'t wait \'til the next chapter! Please Hurry!!!! *grovels*
person amy
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! I want more please!!! I love the fact that you have Harry kinda slowly becoming darker and darker! it\'s so good!! (hope that boosts the confidence)