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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely in love with this fic. I just love the ideas and the potential here. I\'m going to implore that, as a writer, you are going to come across idiotic critics like the author of that flame, who, may i mention, has far too much time on her hands, and you should just ignore such obvious stupidity and continue one of the best fics I\'ve read in the last 6 months. I eagerly await the next chapters.
p.s. You rock!
p.s. You rock!
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I was hoping for a new chapter. Thanks alot Miss Lesley or whatever the hell your name is. Note to self- Never flame this fic. hehe Hmm, I can\'t remember if I\'ve ever even reviewed this fic, but anyways wanted to tell you how much I love it. The whole manservant thing has so much potential. Out of and in the bedroom, if you know what I mean. Well, I\'m sure you do. So, anyways, yes, I want-no,wait, need- you to continue on with this fic. I can\'t wait for Chapter 6!
Jen~_~
Jen~_~
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well this flame response you told me about got me curious so I fid sid since I had you fic up to read it I\"d go ahead and read the whole thing. (Yes, if you remember correctly I\'m sick and I said I\'d read it another day...I lied...lol) I can\'t wait to see the tissy fit Harry\'s gonna throw about him being \"temporarily\" kicked out of Gryffindor house. (pardon any mis-spellings typing in the dark). I enjoyed what I\'ve read so far, sure you\'ve left a few things open but the fic isn\'t complete yet either, some people I swear have no patience. I hope you continue this fic, it\'s well written and refreshing ee!!ee!!! Specially Herm failing!! Oh my that\'s hilarious. Use the flame to roast marshmellows and keep writing!!!
~~Minnie
~~Minnie
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HERE HERE!!!! lovely dear. that little one apparently hasn\'t enough maturity to understand or grasp what being on this site means. we write what we would like yes? i mean there are so many different styles if what you happend to write did not appeal to her childish thinking then don\'t read it go to another story that suits YOUR style and let us who love what you have written so far and can\'t wait till you update again. loving your style and belive you were in the right to put this childish flamer in their place. can\'t wait to see where you take us next.
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Serenitas,
I would just like to say that i ADORE your story. I love the way you have twisted the characters of Draco and Harry, that\'s just the way i love to see them. I think that your plot is very well thought out, and the story is very well written. I sincerely hope you continue and use silly little letters like that to fuel your creativity. As a great woman once said \'Smile at your enemies, it really pisses them off\'
Sincerely looking foreward to your next chapter
Jessie
I would just like to say that i ADORE your story. I love the way you have twisted the characters of Draco and Harry, that\'s just the way i love to see them. I think that your plot is very well thought out, and the story is very well written. I sincerely hope you continue and use silly little letters like that to fuel your creativity. As a great woman once said \'Smile at your enemies, it really pisses them off\'
Sincerely looking foreward to your next chapter
Jessie
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September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just had to review your story after you read it and am fervently hoping that you complete this story. I\'ve been wandering through \"Harry Potter fanfiction land\" for a while now trying to find a good story - it is almost unbelievable how much utter rubbish is out there - and by the by I came here, remembered that I had always liked your stories, saw you had one up that I had not read before, and here I am now, totally hooked on A Song Unsong. I don\'t know, many stories that are praised in fandom have good premises, actually have plots, have nice buildup and, all around, are fine and dandy. I read these stories and think they\'re nice enough, but most of them never ly ply pull makemake me want to continuously read more, builds up the anticipation inside me so that I am clamouring for every chapter. Many of these stories are good enough I suppose, but they often lack a certain \"feeling\" in the writing style that calls out to the reader. Your stories, and A Song Unsong do that and such laudable and beautiful work must be applauded. Well wishes and Good luck!
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September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! ^.^ I love dominant!Draco!!! ^O^
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Talk about verbal jabs! The story has great promise and I\'ve enjoyed the first 5 chapters. I\'m always a fan of stories that showcase the manipulations of the evil trio (dumbledore/ron/hermione). Keep up the good work and I look forward to future chapters, thanks for writing.
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t stop now..If you do I\'ll have to hurt myself.
I very much enjoy this story and I believe you are one hell of a writer.
I love the way you keep the boys in charater and expand on it..
Please don\'t do as so many fanfiction writers have done and leave a damn good stroy unfinished.
I very much enjoy this story and I believe you are one hell of a writer.
I love the way you keep the boys in charater and expand on it..
Please don\'t do as so many fanfiction writers have done and leave a damn good stroy unfinished.
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I think this is quite good, and true to character as well. No way in hell would Malfoy an Potter get together without ALOT of bloo first. *snickers* This is great, and I can\'t wait to read more. I especially love the manipulative Dumbledore. ^_^