rate_review Reviews

I think you deserve your status as a professional writer. I adore this story, the complexity of emotion and the whole dom and sub thing has me reading. I stayed up all night reading this story which tells you a lot because I LOVE to sleep.

Please update soon and don't mind the ungrateful idiots who think good stories are done within the first chapter. Plot should build up and people should be more patient.

Anyways, I like the way Harry and Draco have gone. Their relationship is simply... astounding ... it makes me wish I could watch the proceedings of their intimacy.

Adoring reader,
Nitasha

I'm gripped, I want more anaspoors, and Dumbledore to be bitten by one. Can that be arranged?

Reviews are overrated. Hit lists, on the other hand, should be noted. *grins* Yours seems quite high.

And yes, a chappy 15 would be appreciated. Who are the anaspoors after, is Dumblefuck gonna get bit anytime soon, and are the pretty little snakes going to avoid Snape or not? (Hey, he's a favorite of mine...) Also, who are the shadows, what's the mysterious "power the dark lord knows not" in your version.... oh, you get the idea. A chappy 15 (16, 17, 18, etc.) is a requirement.

*pauses to think* Actually, the spelling errors aren't so atrocious as to make the fic unreadable (thank you!), though there are some here and there. Grammar's pretty happy, plot's well-developed and currently leaving readers in suspended "AWWW! Now what!", charries seem fairly well rounded in spite of the ! of their descriptions (I personally find Snape's addiction to coffee vastly amusing). Hmm. Must go poke the stars.

I love it. It's great! I can't wait to know what plan Harry came up with, and if Draco liked it, then iI am shure It is something horiblly amusing for lack of a better word.
D.P.

Are you to update soon? I loved this story and when I went to your profile to see when the last update was and it was LAST YEAR! (well nearly 2 years soon.) Please update, it's the first time I read such a Dark Harry story and a Veela Draco, that doesn't begining with love, when their eyes meet. Please update **Begs on knees**

I just found this story today and after reading it I can honestly say YES I am ready for chapter 15. That is one great story. All that hate and love mixed into a pair of hot teens is unbelievable. Draco and Harry have the ultimate love / hate relationship. Please keep writing and don't wait too long to update.

Thanks!

soooo
you'er JKR huh
k,
i love your story i realy like how you actually keep most of everything canon like
after all this senario is entierly possible
spelling? you? nah your fine
the plot is good, no hole that i could find anyway
keep writing will ya?

Please update this story!!!!!!! Pretty Pretty Please?? =o) I anxiously await Chapter 15.

wheres the rest? T.T plz plz plz PLZ