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Fiiiiinally I\'ve managed to read this whole thing! I\'ve been meaning to for ages but it seems every time I clicked the link my comp froze or I\'ve had to run off suddenly or AFF has run out of bandwidth and booted me *rubs behind* I know, excuses excuses. But now I\'ve had a proper look and I\'m in love with it!!! Harry is properly resentful (I hate him being so easy-going all the time), Draco is mean and spiteful (Yaaaaaay!) and Hermione is appropriately annoying *sighs happily* And so I will demand that you update i the near future!! As it is I\'m getting withdrawal pains already. Peace m\'dear, onward and upward! :)

~Faerie

that girl w/ the flame is such a complete idiot. she asks way too many questions. can\'t she understand that there are only 6 chapters so far in the story? guess not. anyway, keep up the great work on the (hopefully) upcoming chapters & congrats on the new job!

THIS IS SO GOOD!
i can\'t believe that person told you that this fic was bad... it\'s so awesome.
i just have one little objection... where\'s the sex?! i know i\'m a horny bastard... but i can\'t stand this for much longer. oh, and try not to let Draco hurt Harry too much... i\'m not a huge fan of non-con and all that rot. but BDSM is fine by me!
Well, cheers and kisses,
Sarah:) aka Haco lover!

i really like this story it gives a view of harry that i kinda like. well anyways please please keep writing i want to see what happens. :)

Now that was a twist. You\'ve got your work cut out for you getting the boys from an attempted rape to a more-or-less consensual relationship, but I\'m sure that if anyone can do it, you can. You had best get back to writing ASAP.

What a bitch! This story is great and the plot is exactly as it should be. Besides what say does she have when the author of a FANFICTION is the one writing it. I think that she was dieing to see what happens in the end and she had to ask questions because she couldn\'t wait to see the rest of the story. Anyway, please continue. *bows*

Omg. Miss Leslie (sp? phht who gives a shit) talks a load of horse shit. I LOVE your story, and i agree with you leaving the readers to think it over, figure it out for themselves. Not everything in life is served on a platter, answering your many questions. You have the right attitude for not taking her shit. Portray your characters however you want to portray them. I must admit, I became a fan of Dark!Harry after reading this, and have unsuccessfully found other stories that match up to yours. So to answer your question my answer is: YES YES YES! PLEASE CONTINUE! She ily lly like the second out of about..what? 80? 90? that don\'t like your story. She probably reads those stupid teenybopper fics that aRe tYped lIke thIS and are like \"OMG...Harry is my soul mate! I want to lovvve him! ohh i need him. His eyes--oohh god! I love him with all my soullll!\"
So yeah. Keep your head high, and stay strong. Keep pushing on. She isn\'t worth it, not at all.
ps. Once i\'ve written my Draco/Harry (Dark!Harry because of you ^__^) I\'m hoping you\'d archive it on your wite. Which i visit constantly to read your fics, and the other amazing ones you have on there.
Love, I guess you can call me your no. 1 fan
--Dannii

I agree... people need to keep their negative comments to themselves. If they don\'t like the fic, don\'t read it.
It\'s that simple. It\'s your fic and you have the right to make it how you want it. The characters can be OoC if
that\'s the way you want them. I, on the other hand, love your fic. I like that it\'s different than the normal vanilla
fic. I\'ll be looking forward to the next update.

Wow. I cannot believe she had the guts to pick at your story like this. well, ok, so maybe i can believe it. -_-; I know what it\'s like for someone to tell me that i\'ve done something wrong. it does hurt, but i\'m not letting that get me down. i beg you to please not quit writing, and of course, i must tell you that i really do like your fic, and i don\'t care if it\'s slightly OOC or anything like that. it\'s very entertaining, and i enjoy reading a Dark!Harry just as much as i like reading a Sweet!Harry. Keep up the good work, hon, and don\'t worry about it. We ALL grow as writers, and fanfiction is the best way to do just that. :)
*hugs and snoodles*
~Luna

Please don\'t stop!!!
And don\'t let some little peabrained mary jane that should be subjected to painful torture stop you.
And I love the way you smacked her down although she more then likely will not understand the response.
I have said you write Harry the way I see him in my mind as well as all the others.
Use the anger my child it will make a good chapter. I shut up now....