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DUDE! its a shame ch.13 is delayed.... still DUDE! how awsome is your story ^_^ you have a great imagination to do a plot like this i think and for this i am truely in awe as though i have thought of many a thing like this, heve not been able to get the courage to right these disturbed images down into a story (and you say you needed a booster!). For that, i revere you (not like a god but as a pretty good g.d. writer ^_^). the insults at the beginning were great and i think you should keep up with those words (the insults were brilliant and i love you for that ^_^ Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo yeah!...) keep up with the great writing and also i was wondering, what does happen to Malfoy if Potter stops shagging him? if you mentioned that in the story i must have missed it so could ya kinda clear it out for me? ^_^
with love and respect
SUSHI xo
(Su-chan)
^_^

I like it. You are a good writer. I hope you finish the story soon.

Bah, ignore the buffoons. They always get what\'s coming to them in the end. I for one want to see how it all plays out.

DO NOT DELAY!!!!! whoever told you that is a worthless piece of shit! You have talent! Continue writing! Fuck anyone who disagrees! (Not really, but.... pay large mental ward inmates to do the deed for you) PLEASE CONTINUE! IT IS GOOD!

First off, just hear me out, okay? I\'m not flaming you. You do seem to have a tendencyjumpjump all over reviewers who leave you constructive comments, however. There is a difference between pointing out things constructively in order to help you improve your writing and flaming you. From what I\'ve read of your reviews and in your notes, you\'ve been attacking your supporters. Lesley cared enough and was following your story closely enough to have questions about the plot. She didn\'t come across as rude to me. And when JD said you were harsh on her, you deleted that review (which really wasn\'t as bad as you clamed in your journal) and then you publicly bashed JD as well. Again, please just hear me out before adding me to your black list of reviewers who must die. I actually like you, okay? You just need to learn that sometimes when people point things out to you, they aren\'t doing it to be cruel. For anceance, you don\'t seem to know the rule about using commas around direct address. For a writer, this is rather shocking, but maybe just nobody ever happened to tell you. It\'s not your fault, and I blame your school teachers. Now, you can either take that as helpful advice or you can choose to hate me. But wouldn\'t you rather try to learn from what people say instead oftingting upset about it? If we didn\'t find some value in your work, we wouldn\'t bother with revie it it at all. Oh, and I don\'t have an e-mail account other than school/work, and that is why I\'m not leaving one, but it\'s not as though you don\'t have any forum in which to respond. You have here you your journal, and you don\'t seem to mind responding to things publicly. I only ask that if you decide to make me out as somebody who was awful to you, don\'t delete my review so that people can judge for themselves, and please do put put words in my mouth like you did with JD\'s review.

I like your story and I would like to see updates if there are more to come. I would love to see what decision Draco made and what comes next. Keep up the good work.

Hello,

I just finished reading your story and I must say I love it. I love the way you outline Harry as weak and dark. I almost thought I was the only one who despised Dumbledore, but there you are *g* I also like your style of writing and will be looking out for the next chapter of this wonderful story!!!!

I know You have probably heard this all before and I only blab on but I wish I could write as well as you do. I truly admire you.

Greetings Lyonessheart

I think your fiction is very good and if people got wrapped up in the story like they are supposed to, they wouldn\'t notice any punctuation errors. Keep up the good work!