rate_review Reviews

{i start at saying tha spe speling and grammer are the worst there is so forgive me...}
i read all the chepters and i enjoyd it.
to see the dark side of the perfect harry potter was very refreshing, i have a lot of questions about this story
but i belive all all will be solved in the end, so i wont bother you with them.
i loved draco! you did his cherecter perfectly.
i hate ron and hermione and enjoyd very much the way you writhed them, but one thing botherd me and it was the way that harry hated them so much
i meen they were his best friend\'s and did gave him some surt of light
but offcourse that just my way of thinking...
let me say again that i loved this story
and im looking forward to read more chepters!
please hurry with the updating
thank you
noa

I am not sure what others have told you about this particular story but I for one liked it and hope that you finish it. I have always thought that considering everything that he has gone through Harry being human like the rest of us would most likely not be all sweetness and light

hey, great story u got there but im getting a bit bored. make them fall in love!!! the hate thing is kool and all but its been going on for too long and it getting boring. this is not a flame.

I just found your story and had to read it straight through. I just love it!! For some reason I just love a dominant Draco :) But it was fun to see them both fight for dominance. I sure hope Harry will be ok though. Please say you will finish this :) Do you know of any other stories where Draco is dominant?

charley2294@yahoo.com

all 12 -no- 11 chapters were awsome. I loved all the angst between Draco & Harry pluss the whole breaking of the trio. Except one questions. Shadows? Is that like a dementor? I also loved how you portrayed Albus, all in all your y isy is fab and please please please continue! THANKS!!!!

You know what? Your absolutely bloody brilliant! Need I say more?! ^_^

I really like your fanfiction. And I\'m sure you hear that on a regular basis (Or I would assume you do with how good this fic is). I can\'t say that I noticed the puncuation and all the other things you added which were wrong (but I sometimes read things backwards andng tng too). I really enjoy reading your story, and I can honestly believe that your a professional writer, your a very, very talented person. I hope you update soon, but there is really no way to force you (Not that I would try to). Blessed be.

~Carly (aka DarkPrincess3)

Loved it ! gah, you\'re one of the best writers I have ever encountered on the net.

ok, ya know what?? that bit about not being worthy of reviews or soemthing at the end toatally pissed me off. have you ever tried going anywere like www.harrypotterfanfiction.com??? for some reason, the fanfiction in those places alwase sucks. Writers never give any rationalization to thier story lines, thier grammer sucks for real, and thire storys are all writtwen like:\"Snape thought harry was hot. He looked at him and likked his lips Harry who had a very big dick snape coul see it throuigh his hot tight pants and it was making hard though snapwe was hot too.\" I cant standt sht shit. you can hardly keep track of the storylines, and they\'re not even PWPs. Your story(though a ron hater-tear) has a plausible, clear, and detailed plot. It is acctually quite well written, and grammer mistakes are minor enough not to effect the artistic flow of the story line. I have been keeping up with your story for months(i think since the second chap.) and check for updates on a regular, almost daily basis. please continue writing, and take heart that soembody who was taking AP writing courses by her junior year apprieciates and enjoys her writing. Thankyou, keep up the good work, and please quitt it with the low self esteem attitude, it will get you no-where. just believe in yourself-you are worth believing in!!!
~magegirl

I hope you do another chapter, because if you leave it like this I will kill you ^.^ hahah...

Anyway, good story!