rate_review Reviews

I ADORE this story! Anyone that tells you you need writing lessons is an utter imbecile! Yes you have a few small grammatical errors, but compared to most of the stories on this site there is no comparison. You have talent. I eagerly await the next chapter, and I hope you use those stupid reviews as fuel for a nice crispy bonfire!

Jessie

I am loving this!!!
It\'s awsome! Keep it coming.
Love it Love it Love it!
post soon please
alison

This is the best story I have ever read. I swear to you, I have never read anything more origional with a used idea. I like angsty Harry (which is how I\'ve always seen him in my head), and the fact that Draco isnt\' all lovey is just...I am in deep awe. Please, as quick as you can, please, write more. I\'ve never been this drawn to a story. You have my undivided attention, and respect, as a fellow writer, and fellow Harry Potter lover.

~stacy

Well, I read the unedited version and was going to leave my review on ff.net. Unfortunately, as you probably are already aware, yfic fic is no longer on the site >:(. What the feck is up with those morons at ff.net?!?

Ok, on to the review. Awesome chapter, as always! That \"dream bonding\" sequence (and everything that lead up to it) was very original, and extremely intense! To put it in a nutshell: Was it worth the wait? Do we want more?? Hell yeah!! :D

I\'m looking forward to the next chapter! I\'ll bookmark this version in case you don\'t repost the fic on the fecked-up site, as I\'ve got you in my author alert list. Take care!!

--DeathStryke

This is really good- it\'s rougher then I usually like, but I\'m still lovingry mry minute of it. I can\'t wait to see where you take it.

alright, im not claiming to be a great writer, cause i know im not, however, i know good work when i read it. your story has a good plot, yes, but the charac are are so OOC (hermione, ron, dumbledore, mcgonagall, harry; draco is somewhat believable) that its hard to even concentrate on it. you say u are a professional writer, you have many errors in your grammar and a lot of thinking to do when the chaers ers come into play. however, like i said before, your plot is really good, you just need to work on your characters. ~SSb

Dah! *Falls over* Yes, it was definately worth the wait! x.x; But, I wouldn\'t have minded if the chapter had come out sooner. *Hint, hint* Dah, You need to continue the fic. You torture me (and your other readers) so! Dah! I want to know what happens next! Grr~! I don\'t like Lucius... And I don\'t want Draco to be Initiated... ;.; I like how Harry and Draco are all cute and stuff... ^^; But the whole Let-me-beat-the-crap-out-of-you-and-then-kiss-it-and-make-it-better-just-so-I-can-do-it-over-again-ness is happy, too. ^^; (Not happy as in the emotion... <.<;; ) But... Dah! You need to keep writing! x.x;

Wonderful. Another excellent chapter. Leavio mao many unanswered quons,ons, and opening new ones. And we have an evil Lucius who expects unswerving obedience from his son and isn\'t an overly indulgent parent. Just how I love him...
Thanx Ren, Keep writing.

Noc xxx

YES! *PLEASE* continue to update this story!!! I apologize for not reviewing more,(REALLY unforgivable as you\'re one of my
fave writers...One of the very first H/D stories that I read was your \"It Was A Thursday\" and it\'s *STILL* one of my favs)but
being as lazy (and with computer time restraints, pressed for time)as I am, I tend to only review ongoing stories as opposed
to one-shots. Why didn\'t I review this before then? Err...(*blushes in embarressment*)I only started reading this last week.

I am really fascinated by this story. It is so very differenom aom any of the other H/D fics I\'ve read, which makes it that much more interesting since I can\'t predict where you are going with it. I hope you update soon!