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Your warnings were well-deserved for this chapter. Still, is there something real between Harry and Draco? I am intrigued by Draco\'s role with Voldemort. What does Lucius see and why is it so important for him to give his son to the Dark Lord? You have me hooked--I must know what will happen!

Well, I\'ll admit that certain things could use some work (please don\'t take offence, I\'m really not trying to be insulting), but the people that flamed you really hadrighright to. This is one of the best \'Draco is a Veela\' fics I\'ve read in a long time. It is a bit OOC at times, but you clearly stated that it would be. I really hope you don\'t let people like that get to you, and that you continue on with this fic. It really is quite good, and it\'s just starting to get to the even more exciting/suspenseful things! You can\'t leave it now. No, no, no. Not eif tif thousands of people flame you can you leave it now. Just know that there *are* people out there that are truly enjoying this fic, even if some others don\'t appreciate it.

-M.

I must tell you, I love you so much right now. Curse any flamer that has tried to insult you, when it is obvious that they do not deserve to read your art. It reminds me, the want to feel pain, to rip yourself apart to do so. To close off your heart just so you can be free. When smiles aren\'t real anymore.

I babbled. Sorry.

I hope you don\'t mind if I point something out, though it is rather trivial. It just stuck in my mind. This is probably really stupid of me but...

\"Harry

Do you hate me if I tell you that was sweet? Great dialogues between Draco and Harry. I don\'t get ff.net, it wasn\'t worse than former chapters. \"I hate you\"-\"fuck me\" was no surprise but well done.

*is speechless*
*tries to think of something meaningful to say* uh... I liked it a lot...
Sod that, I LOVED it. A friend recommended it to me and I was hooked from the first word. I\'d never read anything like this before, but now I\'m so glad I did, it was so beautiful, so dark, so... brutal!
Games within games within games... All convinced that their game is important, but whose game really is? Who will triumph? Or will the game continue regardless, leaving a trail of bruised and broken bodies, without a victor as those who succeed damn themselves to oblivion?
Ah I\'m rambling now. I tend to do that at 2am. But I\'m patient, I\'ll wait for the answers, if indeed there are anyd I\d I\'ll be keeping a very close eye on this fic in the future.
Much love,
MSS

Oh my gosh! This is one of the most intriguing, darkest, most absorbing H/D stories I\'ve read in a while. Your words really grip the reader - the violence, the gore, the passion - you make it all so believable. I admit, I flu fluffy H/Ds too but your fic has them incredibly in character. This is the way they would fall in love in canon, if it were to ever happen.

Wonderful, erfuerful job! I hope you update soon.

-Nikki

Dude.....more!
Brilliant, eventful and annoyingly cut off!!!!!! Dude, i repeat, more!!!, and don\'t tell us that we have to wait practacally another month for the next one! =(
ps. did i mention that i quite like this story?

at first I started out hating this story, because Harry desicribed me so well and it scared me, but then as I followed more into the story I was pleasently surpised at the outcome, and I was surpirised that they hadn\'t realized that to hate so much is to love with a passion.

the 13th chapter was my favortie when they finally realized they needed each other, not only to keep Draco alive, but in a passionate way as well. and that made me happy, they needed eachother to feel and to be no matter what they say they are coneccted and they are happy about it, or they will be, it is already starting to happen.

the mantra \"I hate you\" that Harry was repaeting, seemed only to deny the feelings to himself, was more to convince himself he didn\'t feel anything for Draco than to actually tell him he hated him.

please continue this story, there was so much more I wanted to say but couldn\'t find a way to put it into words.

Ok.. you\'re not going to tell me that A Song Unsung got deleted from ff.net are you?
THIS CHAPTER WAS ABSOLUTELY GREAT, BRILLIANT... I I I don\'t know what to say... Please update soon, or I\'ll die or something like that
Lots and Lots of Love, Black Elf (*Cherish)

Woo-Hoo! Way to tell Miss Leslie. BTW lovin the story!!!! Dark Harry rocks!! SLYTHERINS rock (for anyone out there *cough* who claim to be a fan and can\'t spell) Anyway, does she know the meaning of FANFICTION - if she wanted everything to go in accordance to the books with no outside imagination, she should stick to reading the books, end of. Anywho, carry on - it\'s so deliciously morish!!!!!

big chibi smiles, ransgal