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for A Song Unsung

by Serenitas

person L e B o S h I
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* I\'m already crying from Vanish, and now I\'m subjecting myself to the wonderful, terrible darkness contained within the pages of ASU. *glare* I hate the emotion your writing evokes. Beautiful writing, beautiful emotions... and jealousy on my part, lol.

Asshole!Draco never gets boring. You manage never to let him get...old. Know what I mean?

But aaaargh, I\'m glad Hermione\'s finally coming to her senses. If only everyone ELSE would, too! Draco, Ron, Dumbledore, the staff... ARGH... I\'ve never been more frustrated with fanfic characters.

What the hell are the Shadows? Tangible representations of the darkness within Harry\'s heart? Or something...more?

It scares me how cruel you can make these two be to each other. ...Rather scary, to be honest. I\'m sitting here with my jaw open, and this is the second time I\'ve read this. But then it all turns so suddenly to lust. It\'s a smooth transition, surprisingly. It\'s just...so odd in concept. I\'ve never seen the H/D love-hate relationship brought into such intricate use as in this fic. You toy with every aspect of it... The last two lines and the last bit of the dream make me crave the next chapter. Write? Pleeeeeease?
person tyrini
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!! i loved it...does that make me perverse..you bet your ass it does... Really really really good... Disturbingly good... i\'m so Sorry it got deleted from Fanfiction... im willing to kill whoever did that.... Amazing ... But i just want to know..who said \"i love you\" ...was it Draco..... and is Snape evil in this...And please ensure that Hermione and Ron are killed..they really really piss me off in your fic.... Toodles and till next update...although how on earth will i know when you update... guess im going to have to figure a way out..anyhow,... really really goooooooood... !!!!!!!!! Uber shibby
person moriqvendi
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi Serenitas! this is the most darkly beautiful story i\'ve read! i understand you so much, i\'m so tired of all this lovey dovey h/d fics! i\'ve been looking for something like a Song Unsung for eternity and thank God i found you! pe ple please please please please continue the story! i cant wait to read more of it. You should not let anyone get under your skin about your fic, this is gorgeous and fuck those who dont think so! you have no idea how many people out there are enthralled with Song Unsung, this is like a drug of some kind. I began reading you in the morning and couldnt stop until i finished chapter 13, i had to argue with my sisters and brother on who owns the computer, and i won because i was so determined to finish everything there is on Song Unsung. Please, if it is possible, hurry up with the chapter 14!!!!! i beg you i beg you i beg you!!!!!
deepest respect,
syinat from Kyrgyzstan (probably you\'ve never heard of such a place but we do exist and there are people even in here who adore your works!)
person MagicMintDragon
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dont ever let anyone tell you that you dont write like a professional. You are one of my favorite fanfic writers of all time your story A Song Unsung is completely original and awesome to read. I hate those fluffy Harry/Draco stories that never really give a good reason for why they got together. I really love this and I wanted to leave you a longer review but I have to got to work. Keep writing!!
person Shinigami
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My god! Finaly those two said the three little words!!! Continue please!!!!
person a-yolanda13
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. Addictive I could say. Love the way you write the fic. Please update soon. I cant wait to read what is going to happen next.
person Diana
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC fic! I got the link from Glassesreflect, and oohhoohohoho! I cant wait to read more :) Please write more!

-Diana
person Samantha
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, what to say...what to say...how about...HOW FARQING AWESOME ARE YOU????? This fic is totally amazing!! I felt every bit of hatred and malice Harry felt. I too have that \"If I shut myself off, maybe no one can touch me\" thing. You are truly an admirable writer. It\'s now...12:47 AM and I\'m going to cry because there isn\'t a new chapter!! Gah, I don\'t know how to be patient!! This bloody well stinks, dammit. No offense of course, love, I do realize you have a life..but can\'t it involve keeping me happy?? :( UPDATE SOON!!!!! Pweeze and crawkers? I wuv you? =^..^= meow? :P
person Cat
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This kinda fic is exactly what I love about fanfiction. It\'s not the cock \'n\' bull with Draco falling in lust with Harry with them- after fucking, falling deeply in love, it\'s not the predictable shite with Hermione and Draco being so smart that they fall in love because they... just do. The only fics I see like this are simple one-shot non-con or BDSM fics, just sex and nothing more. This is much better and if you\'ve read this review- get back to writing this fic ya sick fuck coz the other sick fucks like me don\'t like to be kept waiting.

On a side note (if you\'re still reading this, what did I say about reading this): I love the way ya roast the flamers. Smite them all. *grumbles* Stupid little fanboys and fangirls thing they know everything. You\'re also a damned good writer. (Keep writing the fic. Now!)
person chantalmalfoy
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was great. A little sickening, but still awesome. I can\'t wait for the next part.