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Well firstly, I thought you might like to know that your second chappie isn't for Harry Potter, but I'm sure alot of people have pointed that out to you already sooo...... >.> Yeah.... the whole "making the stars sparkle" thing? Sorry, not really feeling it. Kinda corny. Not bashing, just.... being honest you know. I think your story has alot of potential, I just think you need to redo things. Constructive criticism. Well.... hopefully constructive for you. :)

This fic is really awsome. This fic and one other one of fanfiction.net which is rated M by the way, are the two best "Erotica-Bellatrix" fics I've rune across in the world of fanfiction--and believe me--they're hard to find. *sigh* Must go on to read chapter two and the others.

~Kat

Where's chapter two of the fic concerning Bella? Did you accidentally post chapter four of another story? I also wanted to add that I agree with the fact that a beta would be a good idea. I'd be more than willing to beta it if you want, just e-mail me. The fanfic has WAY too much potential to be put aside.

uh. the second chapters for kenshin. you might want to fix that...

Hey upate.Its getting GOOD!!

[Repyaing back the review you gave for my fic]

Very emotional. The whole 4 chapters I\'ve read. Dark, depressive with intriguing sadness. I enjoy fics like these. they make you feel what the characters feel with expressive and detailed words. I know what kind of work you have to put into this fic to make it so dramatic. Good work, BTW the lemon was not too early. I was amused my the small humor set ins between the chapters. I like the small paragraphs you put at the beginning to describe Kagome\'s words as she talked to her son before she died.

Wondering what the hell is awaiting in the next update,

BlueSaiyanChick

Damn I hate how short that was! Is sos so good!! I really like that angsty not quite rape thing...I hope to read more from you in the future!

Good, but you really need a beta.