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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Andrian, thank you for the note to let us know you are still working on Damaged Goods. And you are so very wellcome for the reviews. I always try to review for stories that I enjoy, so the authors are encouraged to continue. I love your work and this is a phenominal story. I hope that the creative juices continue to flow!
Ness,
Ness,
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
At last you have reached that horrid cliff hanger that I am forever wishing you to solve for me! Please tell me you will be updating new chapters very soon!
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woah...thats all i can say right now. I mean, god i have so much to say about this. i must go to bed now thought, or else ver ver make it up in the morming. I will write you a nice long review tomorrow. But yeah Awespme story cant get enough keep going...and WOAH
Catherine
Catherine
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn.
that\'s some well written, well thought-out shit you got there. it\'s not as fun and smutty as most of the stuff on this site, I gotta admit, but it has serious plot. and not too many typos, amazing.
kudos on the writing and keeping the characters realistic, too many peomakemake them into fluffy, two dimensional nitwits, but you\'ve actually put thought into this. I\'m especially impressed by the homework you have obviously done here. Romanian, Latin, botany, very nice touches. keep up the good work. this is the first piece that has actually impressed me enough to write a review.
that\'s some well written, well thought-out shit you got there. it\'s not as fun and smutty as most of the stuff on this site, I gotta admit, but it has serious plot. and not too many typos, amazing.
kudos on the writing and keeping the characters realistic, too many peomakemake them into fluffy, two dimensional nitwits, but you\'ve actually put thought into this. I\'m especially impressed by the homework you have obviously done here. Romanian, Latin, botany, very nice touches. keep up the good work. this is the first piece that has actually impressed me enough to write a review.
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been loving every minute of this story. I can\'t wait for the next installment!
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell!!
That\'s some power Severus has got there isn\'t it?
This story is getting more and more interesting and I can\'t wait to fout out whats going to happen!
GrrArrg
That\'s some power Severus has got there isn\'t it?
This story is getting more and more interesting and I can\'t wait to fout out whats going to happen!
GrrArrg
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
poor puppy. can we kill the bastard now
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter and I hate Lucius in your story! Cruel mean, evil, bugger! Poor Mione! I can\'t wait for things to happen between Sev and Mione. Are you going to have Hermione have an elemental power? Are you working or chapter 20? I can\'t wait to see how everything works out! Update soon!
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great update... the new caretaker\'s description reminds me alot of Crookshanks...
Keep Writing,
Laerai
Keep Writing,
Laerai
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A truly detailed and incredibly complex story you\'re creating. Brava! Wonderful job. I continue to look forward to each new chapter!
Kiri
Kiri