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for Tension and Fate

by Nifty225

person MadAboutHarry
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, those aren\'t the pairings that I usually follow, but this was very well done and quite enjoyable, in a squirmy kind of way. Please continue.
person insanity
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter, suggestions...

Ron and Hermione and Harry!
Ginny, Hermione and Harry!

Or just more Ron action of any sort, or we could get the twins involved... Some Fred/Hermione or George/Harry... or something. I have no idea. I\'m jupoutpouting off ideas.

If all else fails, just have them experiment more. I\'d read it. :)
person Phoenix
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ME LIKEY!!!!!!!!!! Very good. i enjoyed readin\' that. please post another chappie soon.
person kk
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story, and yleaslease please please continue.
I REEEEAAAALLLYYYY want a second chapter.
person Eric Cartman (day dreaming as Hitler)
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Schnell ach. Lovental bros lieben. And I menschen vergen broder. Doktor Schtalin? Alarm! Menchoss? Zellan vei zamboa- Lueden est verboten, a den ascriber utz, kapieda hockuh, wite more, God dammit!
person TKiwi
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was great! but what about the next morning? what\'ll happen???! O.o please make this longer- pwease?!!
-Kiwi
person HPfreak18
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You should continue as soon as possible, this was good and I think you should continue this with an after math or something, I llove these pairings and want more!
person BladeCelebare
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting... three different ways of coming to climax without actual penetration ;) Intreguing, and fairly well-written.
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Let\'s just IGNORE canon completely!