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for Tension and Fate

by Nifty225

person Sarah
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please please write more. I thinkthis story is excellent and I would love to read further chapters!
person Rocky235
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun story to read. Kind of sweet.
person Vixen Malfoy
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grin* well usually i\'m really not a Hermione/Ron paring kind of person but i love this story! i definately think that you should continue writing, because i NEED to find out what happens next. Love it!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Simply the best Harry Potter lemon I have ever read. You left us hanging, though. PLEASE continue the story - Hermionie was damn sexy in that chapter.
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PS: If you\'re planning to make the next chapter PWP, a Ginny/Hermionie/Harry would be the obvious choice, but somehow I think your story is more than just a simple PWP. Hermionie/Ron and Harry/Ginny seemed to click, so simply keeping the existing relationships, and exploring how they explain what happened in the morning, and if they tell each other or keep the relationships a secret, etc etc.

Oh, and more of Hermionie being a tiger in the bedroom. That was HAWT.
person nikki
schedule August 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pls pls pls write another chappy.
very cool story
write more please
love it


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person strange_pepoles
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good! Good! Continue, just go through the book with changes two acomidate the relationships. my complements.
person H/G Fan
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! What a combination! My two fav couples in one. And what a great contrast between the raw lust and passion of Ron and Hermione and the sweet and sexy encounter between Harry and Ginny. More.... PLEASE!!!
person heyo
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very well done, love to see another chapter....
person dutchie
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. Hopefully, this story will be continued as it has gone off to a good start. For a suggestion for the next chapeter, I suggest firstly, the aftermath of the first night and then of course Ginny and Ron should return the fvaour that Harry and Hermione bestowed on them.