rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I think part of chapter three is cut off, they don't make it to hogsmeade and what muggle game?

From what I read of the first couple of chapters this is really good.
But after that parts of the chapters were missing and even entire chapters.
I would really like it if you could send the entire story to my e-mail.
Thanks

Hello,

I really liked reading the story even though some parts were missing. I would appreciate it very much if you would send me the whole text.

Shella

I loved this story! You did a really good job and the story was cute! Plus, your grammar was good for somebody who speaks another language. There were a few mistakes here and there, but overall you did great! I will definitely be looking for more of your stories. Keep writing! ^_^

It is a wonderful idea to throw Severus and Hermoine\'s daughter back to before they get together. I especially liked that you paired her with Harry (imagine the look on Severus\'s face for that!) The only problem with the story was that you showed her going back to her time plus forward several months. In the books it\'s always noted that the time turner can take you back to the exact time that you left-without the lag of the time you were away that is shown here. Even with her amnesia, et al, there should not have been a lag. Otherwise, a wonderful first story-I look forward to your next.

Bloody brilliant fic. In fact one of the best(est) fics I

What a delightful piece of fluff. This made me smile and I enjoyed it! Especially the ending!

Wow! You Added An Epilogue! :)

It was a wonderful story, and the end does fit!

Hope you write another story soon!

Nice story, well done, a different twist to the time-turner story. Are you going to do Emily next. Only kidding!!!!