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by DeathSweetDeath0

person Zionicgirl
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I noticed someone accusing you of stealing ideas from \"This Subdued Fire\"

I\'ve read both yours and this other story. There are some similarities, but that can\'t be avoided when you\'re writing and attempting new ideas. There are only so many different ways for Hermione and Draco to come together, and you are doing a splendid job.

Also, \"This Subdued Fire\" is posted on AFF.com as well. (Not sure if you\'ve noticed it yet or not - it\'s been here for awhile)
http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=7283 <--- That\'s the link for it.

If you haven\'t read it; I suggest you do! It really is quite good.

Anyway, keep up your writing as well :)
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey. You\'ve stolen a lot of stuff from BeautifullyMalicious\' \"This Subdued Fire.\" Why didn\'t you at least give him/her credit?
person Emma
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg, you really have to write another chapter. this fic is really great!
person dem
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is great now what will happen?
person samantha
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey great chapter!! Loved IT! Keep up with the good work and maybe you will go far. Hey, someones gotta take Rowlings place in years to come, you never know. Of course she is the best author ever but your in close second.. Hurry up.....I can\'t take cliffhangers....AHHHH!
person Samantha
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE!!! That story was soooo good. Your one of the very few writers who can actually spell right. Your details were very amazing and your plot was very believable
person Samantha
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE!!! That story was soooo good. Your one of the very few writers who can actually spell right. Your details were very amazing and your plot was very believable
person Liz
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh beautiful. More!
person Ana Liddrel
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a very beautiful way of writing,especially the end,very beautiful.
it seemed that you rushed through it a little bit, but all in all, very nice fic, maybe more (hopeful smile)


kisses and bites.......:) Hee Hee


Ana
person Rurouni_agra
schedule January 2, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter. I like your matchups, beside it\'s your fic, i\'m just the annoying reviewer.

Haha! Hermione kissing Draco and Botan kissing Koenma was hilariouse. I was laughing so hard there were tears in my eyes. I can SO picture the look of shock on Ron\'s and Harry\'s faces. And Ginny with the song! Holy carp that was funny.

I\'m looking forward to the two proposals. I know you\'ll make them really nice.

Now what is it that Botan and Yukina know that we don\'t? I hate not knowing. Please hurry with more chapters!

Ja ne!

P.S. I\'ll be sure to read you Star Trek crossover and review for that.