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person nina
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ah noooo why did you have to stop there i want to know what\'s going to happen please update very very soon pretty please * giving you puppydog eyes that you can\'t resist *
person nina
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
woopsie i revieuwed twice sorry but i still want you to update okeey this was the third time so now you have to do it
person allison costa
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heya! wonderful story -- make the chapters longer! this is one couple that i\'ve never really thought of -- i\'ve read one other story with this pairing, but haven\'t really been able to find any others. keep writing!

allison b. costa
http://www.visual-sentiments.com
person Redone
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely and sweet!
person Michael S.
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I will let you know EXACTLY how much I like this! Um... Er... Let\'s see... What adjectives I have yet to give? Ahem. Outstanding, heart-stirring, bracing, piquant, rousing, umm... cream, posh, gay? Okay, kill me now. *grin* Love your story.
person Gem/Hermione
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absely ely love this story so please put some more chapters up. I love the Lucius/Harry pairing, as well as the Snape/Harry etc. Please carry on with it.
person SandraM
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is totally awesome. Hooray for Lucius seeing reason!
person lupusdragon
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: *squeal* Yippie! Lucius is at Hogwarts ^_^
LD: That was great! Harry and Draco are getting along like brothers.... which I guess is a good thing if Harry is going to be bonded to Lucius. One thing... you switched \"save\" and \"safe\" Safe is the adjective while save is the verb. Other than that, the chapter looked great.
Karen: And you know, if you bring that cliffie back again, we are just going to have to maul it further.
LD: *pout* I want some Luc/Harry action. *grinning evilly* Less talk, more action! I foresee Harry launching himself gratefully into Lucius\' arms. *wink*
person mommadar
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I am so glad that I took the time to read it.
Harry and Lucius pairings are delicious and I am looking forward to
the next chapter. I hope that you can post soon. Keep up the great
work and I will wait patiently for the next chapter.
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for CH 12, please write more soon.