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What is wrpng with him!!! I can\'t wait for more!!

You know, all though this chapter, I was trying to urge Harry and Dray to stop being so /stupid/ and see Lucius\' weakness for what it was. I mean, Harry wrote the essay, and Draco had checked though it...the symptoms should have made it kind of obvious. Of course, when they finally /did/ realise what was happening, you had to end it and leave a bloody cliffhanger. *sigh*

That conversation with Snape watherther interesting...it suggests a previous emotional estrangement between Snape and Lucius that has yet to be resolved. Now that would be a confrontation to look forward to...*g*

Anyway, it was a lovely chapter, even if it did make me want to strangle some of the characters...more please!

Cheers,
chibi

UPDATE! DON\'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS, PLEASE!

please tell me Lucius and Harry will complete the bond and will be fine. i hate it when something is not fine with these two. they are going to be togethren\ren\'t they?

Well, what can I say? I\'m wordless. Um, well, obviously not since I am still writing this review. Haha, very funny... eh, anyway... What I really liked was that Harry and Draco started calling each other bro\'s. That was so heartening. And Draco\'s behavious really does not bother me, actually I am quite enjoying Ron\'s discomfort (did I mention I don\'t much like Ron?) Heh. Keep Draco and Harry close friends, and I will love you forever.
Again, the way you made things original and different with Lucius... I never expected that but now that this little worrying twist in the plot is out I ct but but admire you for it. And damn you, I hate cliffhangers! I swear, if you have some more of this written, and I don\'t have it in my mailbox bmorrmorrow, I will personally hex you. Wonder if it is love and caring towards Harry from Lucius\' side that he has been hiding from the boys. Obviously he thinks Harry doesn\'t want to have sex with him, for some reason... maybe he thinks he\'s too old? Well, I am sure you\'re going to enlighten me about these musings in the next chapter.
Wonderful work.

Michie

Yeah, a new chapter! Thank you.

*does a happy dance* I knew it, I knew it! As soon as Draco read the part about the weaker wizard it all fell into place, Harry\'s extra energy. Luc\'s disppearence. He is tyring to kill himself so he doesn\'t have to complete the bonth Hth Harry. Now, my bet is that he is trying to protect Harry, but I have a feeling Draco has something to do with it as well. Or is he worried about what people like Severus will think? Hmmm, very interesting ^_^

Just keep updating deao ato at your own pace and everyting will be good. I\'m not going anywhere *winks*

Lthe the story and always have. Update soon?

please please please when are you going to write the next chapter I\'m dying to read it!

i like your story very much. i adore lucius and harry together. but i don\'t like it when they argue. they will be together, won\'t they? when will they kiss? please keep on writing. your story keeps me going.