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person chantalmalfoy
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... It\'s been a while. I\'m so happy for Draco and Terry! Ron needs to grow up. I hope \'Mione
puts him in his place. And I truly hope that Lucius and Harry can work things out.
person Keikokin
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story thus far. I love Harry/Lucius that isnt all bondage and stuff. What happened to Narcissa was truly horrible. I hope that Harry & Lucius will sort things out. Please tell me this won\'t be a death fic of either Harry, Lucius or Draco? Draco and Terry Boot, well I never saw that one coming. I like it though. Ron seriously needs to grow up!
person severusdraco
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thats really lovely! It\'s quite different from the others, which I\'ve read, but really, really good! It is good written and nice to read. Keep it up and update soon!
person Ice Lupus
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE it! And really hope for more!
person SandraM
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How about some more good stuff. As as for the \'bite me\'... (chonk) teeth on end of nose! You got it!
person Hyperbole
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Waits for Harry to yelp about Lucius\' revelation*

You know I found someone else to give the nickname \'Lucy\' to? And they seem alot more ridiculous with it that Lucius does.

Anyhow, I want more, soon.
person Tirla
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! No real smut and I LOVED it!!! Amasing. Fabulous story! Don\'t stop now...I need more!
Grammar is a little irritating but I finally adjusted my brain to reword phrases and sentences.
person Michael Serpent
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello beautiful... This was awesome, as usual. Don\'t you worry about the sex scene. If there\'s anything I appreciate in these stories, it\'s originality. And you certainly managed that. It\'s not everyday you find a story where Harry\'s fucking Lucius. :) And, ah yes, that was an evil cliffhanger! However, it was yet her her evidence of that incredibly clever mind that is behind this story. My favorite part in this story, however, has nothing to do with sex: it was when the blue glow started to flow in the Great Hall and Draco flatly noticed that \'It\'s happening\'. So composed in every situation, that one is. Love him, love you,
Michie
person Amber
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have become a fan of this story. I love how you make them seem so much more human and yet not out of character. Please do write some more. I am eager to see what happens next.
person Rena
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! So, big evil Harry \"punished\" Lucius for delay?^_^_^_^_^ On the other hand, Lucius was too unwell to be on top - honestly, if the poor man, who wanted Harry, after quite an erotic foreplay was beginning to harden only with two fingers in his ass, how could we expect from him something more then laying on his back and lettind Harry to do all the job? ^_~
Personaly, I think you\'ve found a very good solution for their \"first time\" thing. It would be awkward, in any case, ahe ahe absence of a spare time, the necessity for quick actions made it.ess ess official(^_^) somehow. After all, the sex in the name of a saving somebody\'s life, unlike the sex for a mere bog pug purpose, is a pretty honourable thing!^_~