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for Diary of a Frustrated Wife

by Yawn

person Andrian
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely delightful and refreshing. It is so realistic and down to earth with the way Molly feels about her body (speaking from experience of the chubette set) and her husband finding her beautiful the way she is. And the part about the boys discussion! Oh I laughed so hard. The writing is brilliant and I love this story of a husband and wife so in love and desiring each other. Bravo!
person Verdenia
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, I am enjoying your take on the Weasleys.
person hellfire
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lurvely, darlin\', just lurrrrvely. keep it up, will you?

hellfire
person Shampoo
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Molly and Arthur? EW! No, I\'m kidding. Pretty cool and the graphic sex scene was sexy and hot. Let\'s have some mold old people having sex...joking again. One question, in the first chappie, they were working on their 8th kide yoe you knocking Molly up? Another Weasley??!!
person Natrasha
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! You wrote more! I love it! Not only is it a great story, but you have a nice, flowing writing style. Keep it up!
person Samantha da Slut
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Go Arthur and Molly. Middle age sex is cool. I enjoy this story so much becuase it\'s totatlly different and doesn\'t involve the usual suspects, ie. Harry or Ron or Hermione or Snape... I can completely see Molly freaking out about her weight. Update soon.
person Juri
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Caught in the act, huh? Funny. Those poor traumatized children. Cool update.
person Natrasha
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! that story was fabulous! I hope you write more, because you have a great writing style. This is the only fic I\'ve ever read about Molly and Arthur. What a great idea!

person Anon
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love Molly, too, and the middle age thing scarily fits my life. Good work.
person hellfire
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my... i do believe that this is indeed the very first time i have ever thought of arthur weasley as sexy. now, he is a stud, and i can see where percy and the twins got it.
great job... keep it up!

*going to go take a cold shower now...*

hellfire