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for Beneath

by soverysita

person Lizski
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I\'m curious to see if Draco follows up on his hunch that Snape\'s interested in Hermione. I like what you\'ve written so far, and I\'m really lookiorwaorward to reading more!
person Rilla
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a truly evil cliffhanger! I love the passion with which you describe his feelings. He\'s a very intense character and it makes perfect sense that his feelings would be equally intense. I\'m waiting on the edge of my seat for an update.
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
POOR Severus:( What will happen to Hermione, will Severus save her & become her hero? Am hoping that you will be updating again soon!!! Deb >^..^<
person kate
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmm....i\'m definitely intrigued. can\'t wait to see where this dark path leads, other than to the edge of the lake. and you\'re extremely adept at guilt, might i add, noting the 3000 hits and comparatively few comments. of course, i\'m extremely susceptible to guilt trips as my mother israveravel agent for them.
person Denial
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Umm...wow. This is absolutly awsome so far. I don\'t know what else to say other than please, please, please contiue it.
person PeevesPetpeeves
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My dear Soverysita ~

This is a wonderful fic and I am enjoying it thoroughly. I love your characterization of Snape and your description of his obsessive feelings. His helpless longing for Hermione is quite beautifully written. I am REALLY looking forward to updates of this story, my e-mail addy is above and I would love to be on an update list for this, or any other fic you craft. Keep writing!!

PeevesPetpeeves
person sande
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He probably would have developed frostbite from the cold, not gangrene. Gangrene is what you get when open wounds get infected.
person Danelle
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Waiting..Waiting..Waiting...
person giova
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
`I really like this, its quite well-written and I love how well you\'ve characterized Snape. I hope you write more soon. BTW, been to New Orleans and love it!
person BeautifullyMalicious
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read a lot of fics, but this is the best thing I\'ve ever read. You are a natural wordsmith and I look forward to the next chapter. Please, email me whenever you update.