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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this fic i gre great! severus\' thoughts are so smutty. you\'d think he was some horny teenager. i want to read more.
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can\'t believe I haven\'t read
this sooner! ase ase update soon!
Your smut scene and the wand - wow!
All I can think of at the moment is
WOW!
Hugs,
Corazon
this sooner! ase ase update soon!
Your smut scene and the wand - wow!
All I can think of at the moment is
WOW!
Hugs,
Corazon
schedule
November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! This is an excellent little tale. I was looking for something to satisfy a little itch--this was my answer. Terrific. :-)
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was SOMETHING!!! Where is Severus going & why? I would think he would want to rip Malfoy apart, not run away!!! Who\'s fabulously smut filled dream are they sharing, his or her\'s? This chapter just makes me want more, more, MORE!!! Will be watching for your next update*
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so intensely emotional. Wow.
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent and I love the psychological drama of the inner turmoil. It is very well done. The mystery and tension of Snape\'s voyeurism is just spot-on and I was, in the initial chapters left wondering how Harry and Ron could abandon Hermione to Draco.
I love the quirk of Hermione being able to sense his presence, the fact that Draco is too dim to notice and the whispered realisation that she never really knew him.
Her precision and concentration over something as simple as a cup of coffee and the resultant knowledge that Snape has watched for so long that he knows her movements, is actually quite an initmate moment.
Just wonderful. I cannot believe this has so few reviews. It\'s well written, well plotted and addictive.
I noted only only one typo and that was Slyvern instead of Slytherin, but it was merely a small point in what promises to be a lucky find on my part.
I love the quirk of Hermione being able to sense his presence, the fact that Draco is too dim to notice and the whispered realisation that she never really knew him.
Her precision and concentration over something as simple as a cup of coffee and the resultant knowledge that Snape has watched for so long that he knows her movements, is actually quite an initmate moment.
Just wonderful. I cannot believe this has so few reviews. It\'s well written, well plotted and addictive.
I noted only only one typo and that was Slyvern instead of Slytherin, but it was merely a small point in what promises to be a lucky find on my part.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHH !!! I hate cliffies and a curse upon you all for leaving me on the edge of my seat !!
Or in other words ....
More please ;)
Glinda
Or in other words ....
More please ;)
Glinda
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really good writing! I really feel Snape\'s torture of wanting a girl he may never have! I hope you can update soon! Sev\'s going to be able to save Hermione right? He can\'t let his lady love drown! ;c)
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very happy to see this updated, as I said before it is quite well-written and I\'m looking forward to more o! g!
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story this morning & I really do like it a lot!!! The way you wrote Severus shows many sides of him, dark, caring, hating, HUMAN. I do hope that you will update soon!!! Deb >^..^<