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by soverysita

person Sapphire Snape
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, excellent, excellent! I love the Professor\'s inner struggle with his feelings. His obsession with Hermione is so very powerful in your story. I hope you will continue with this soon, Sita... :)
person summer
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I love the obsessed Severus angle. The sexual tension poor Sev is living with will hopefully be remedied soon, and when it does I am sure there will be fireworks! Can\'t wait for your next update.
person anon
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ur story has flare.
person jenn
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! If this is your first fic--you are doing a great job. I think that so far it is a wonderful story. I hope you don\'t move if from this site...and if you do I hope you let us know where it is. Don\'t mind those petty little people and their sorry-ass reviews discourage you. I think that you have alot of great talent and it would be a shame to let a few bad tempered people get in the way of that. Anyway, I cannot wait to see how Severus and Hermione get together (outsided of her dream). Keep up the good work, and don\'t abandon this fic...I love it!
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sita,
Sorry that some bad apples had to ruin it for you and the rest of us. My personal philosophy is that if I don\'t have anything nice ty, Iy, I don\'t review. I really liked your fic. I hope that you feel like continuing it soon.
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sita, I am so sorryt that this has happened!!! Please know that I will be checking for your story at the Lord & Lady Snape site as I am very much enjoying it!!! Please keep me on your email list because I really want to keep up with this story!!!
Deb >^..^<
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll admit, I am also a victim of tweaking the story after the initial post. Since you seem to be getting a lot of reviews complaining about moving it back up to the top (and it\'s because you\'re actually just editing it) you may want to put a little note in the header that you are just editing. It helps me avoid those reviews. ;) BTW- I really like your story.
person snape\'s dark haired girl
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enoy your story! Will you please post an update soon?
person snape\'s dark haired girl
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story! Will you please post an update soon?
person Rhynn
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
soverysita,
I am very disappointed to hear that wontwont be continuing your story on this site. A friend of mine introduced me, and your fic was actually the first one I opened. I\'ve been addicted ever since, and checking daily for updates. Please add me to your list so I can continue to enjoy your story, and for those blockheaded, narrow-minded twads who complained because you were improving your writing skills through editing past work, if they dont like what you\'re doing, they dont have to read your work. And it\'s obvious from their complaints that they are either not writers at all, or writers who get jealous because they think you\'re stealing their spotlight. (which, after their behavior, I certainly hope you are).

If you\'re too much of a coward to tell someone your name, you dont belong on this site.

...And just incase mine doesnt show up, I\'ll apologize now, and try to figure out what\'s wrong with my computer again.

~Rhynn